Hmm... It would seem that this Raditz has been left to wonder what's to come of this tale, and be vexed that you didn't keep up on your promise to finish it before your birthday. A promise written a whole THREE years ago. So finish it. Or this Raditz will have little recourse but to tie you up, and subject you to three hours inane Anzu friendship speeches.
This is definitely one of my favorite stories. So why haven't I added it to my favorites list? I'm too lazy, duh!
Anyways, I like how number 1 has the ability to evolve at will. It does seem kind of like one of those fantasies that everybody has, but it also improves this fic (at least in my opinion) in that number 1 is completely self sufficent, or so she thinks...
I think you have a great plot so far, and everything is just superb... update soon, please?
*Ahem* Excuse me. Again, sorry to be so late in reviewing, but my mom really enjoys grounding me from the computer for no good reason. *Sigh* This isn't going to be long, 'cuz I'm not even supposed to be online.
Anyway, another GREAT chapter to a GREAT story, and I love the...er...symbolism, if that's what you can call it. *Knows that's not the right word* There is a lot of wonderful emotion and depth in this story, which I appreciate very much. There aren't that many truly emotional pokémon fanfics out there these days.
Eep! I gotta go! O.O I'll see ya at the next chapter with my normal long, rambling, nonsense review then, okay? Ja ne!
This trainer lydia, was her ability to plan taken from her, or is this a case of a pokemon becoming like its trainer? I hope I am right in assuming that Number 1 is the eevee that girl had, but then again I might be wrong because won't she have to have seen the eevee in the picture with part of her ear missing? Well I'll see if my theroys pain out...
Number 1 is becoming stronger due to her old training. I'm not made Number 2 died, I like sneasels, but I can rest because he did give a good battle before he went. And he did allow Number 1 to break free. Now she just has to explan this mess to Ash and Pikachu. And having blood on your paws is never easy to explan...I wonder if this will change Pikachu's feelings for her?
Hi Zoo! Love the characterization! BTW, I don;t think I will start another fic cause I don't know much about CCS. Tori and Julian are very cute though. That was a good guess on James/Ami for FP (False Pretenses) Someone suggested I should pair up Tracey with Amy... Oh yeah, I have update yours truly Folken/Trista. I am in a serious writer block for now for the other fics... see ya!
Happy to see this 'fic back up on its feet! _ Now it's time for another confusing and utterly useless review! *Smirks* Naww, actually I'll try to make this one at least a little helpful...
Using Swift to pop the bubbles of the Bubblebeam attack is a very cool strategy! I luv Wartortles! But not as much as I luv Eevees. _ Isn't Toxic a great move? Very frustrating when used against you, though.
I liked the linking line of "Sure" for the scenes in between the " Pikachu calls Number 1 a quitter" scene and the "Number Two plotting revenge" scene. To have a common link makes it...I don't know what the word for it is. Clever, I suppose.
The pool party story was a good break from the heavy stuff. And I LOVED the Pokéshipping, as usual. More bonus points for you!
I simply love all the complex insights and scenes left open in this fanfic! It leaves me with a sense of awe and keeps me thinking.
That's the first out of character thing I've heard in this fanfic so far! The part about this girl Ash was in love with getting along with everyone, I mean. I'm not just saying this as an avid pokéshipper either, but I think Misty would probably...um...not like that...
YAY! Finally a confrontation between Number One and Number Two! Cool battle scenes, and I love the effect of having the other pokémon watching. Again, wonderful insights, for they add a gloss of emotion in this 'fic.
You're wonderful with the battle descriptions! They're suspenseful and very cool.
You have a new chapter up? That was pretty quick. Oh, sorry I didn't email you. I guess you already read Aiko Hotaru's fic Two faces starring Hotaru Tomoe. I'm not really familiar with Yu-G-Oh but I've seen only once... Sure, you can do a Sailor Moon/Yu-Gi-Oh crossover. Hmm... It might go well with Captor Card Sakura tooo... Great action scene, Zoo!
Ooo, Raticate ripped off part of her ear? Ick, how sad!
I would've reviewed this sooner, but my mom banned me from the computer for a while. -_-
I love this 'fic! Pikachu and Eevee happen to be two of my favorite pokémon, and the two of the them traveling together is great!
I don't blame Pikachu for worrying about Ash, after all those times Ash has almost been killed. Number 1 is quite blunt with her comments, though, eh? Very in-character for her.
Heh heh, Number 8 liked her ears? That's interesting.
LOL, that was cute with Pikachu bragging and the snowball!
YAY! You made Number 2 a Sneasel! Revenge? Hmmm, this is getting *very* interesting!
Pikachu is too fat? Heh heh heh... This is too great, I love Number 1 and Pikachu's reactions to each other.
Number 1 has such a complex character! So realistic! (I will accept that and stop repeating it to you *someday*)
Yeah, I think a Sneasel is *definitely* fitting for the part of Number 2. I can't see him as a Scizor. He sounds kind of crazy with hatred... That's what makes a good bad guy!
That's cool with the blood staining her paws. Very dramatic. How cruel with those status fights!
Was that...a pokéshipping hint? You get bonus points for that! _
What a sinister message from Number 2! That Sneasel IS obsessed...
...And apparently...Giovanni is too... But who would blame him? Number 1 is incredible.
She's becoming plagued with memory, eh? Looks like Number 1 needs to learn to be a normal pokémon.
Wow, Pikachu's getting really close to her, huh? Oh, don't worry, it wasn't that corny! It was really quite touching that Pikachu feels that way. But...I must agree that all romance is sappy to me, too, even though I write it sometimes... I'm *so* weird.
You'll see me next chapter, like always! :) I'll have to mull over those questions, and I'll *try* to remember to e-mail you! Pikachu and Eevee rule!
Good as always. Of course you know I love number 2, (the guys just so...intristing.) Number 1 and pikachu are starting to come closer. I guess being stuck in an artic wasteland will do that to you. And Giovanni lacks faith, and that may prove costly...
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