|Reviews for Below Decks|
| BetherdyBabe 11/8/11 . chapter 30
A chapter I get to read for the first time up on the site? What a pleasant surprise. :)
"Of course you should. I mean you can, if you want... I don't mind..." Very cute line I can imagine fumbling out into the open exactly as you have it written.
At least a dozen years older... We're making progress! We're that much closer to discovering Gunny's actual age. :)
The Man of Steel - Aha! Bands of steel returns! Couldn't think of a better nickname. *High-fives Carter*
I'm glad Tori's ideas of ending up horizontal came true, even if it wasn't exactly what she was thinking. Then again, it almost never is.
Thanks for publishing, I think you'll find you don't need a silly beta to look it over first. You do great on your own. The proof speaks for itself.
And yes, we wouldn't be too happy if you ended here. Why? You can't leave Gunny's secret left untold! Plus we have to see the other 'adventures'. :) So hard not to spoil...
| Andriabow 11/8/11 . chapter 1
What a great well written story and I loved these two Dwayne
and Victoria and I want more of their story along with more of their friends. Wonderful job. Thanks
| camcampgirl 11/8/11 . chapter 30
Of course I would love to read more adventures! Besides, you can't just allude to a major life episode like what affected Dwayne, and then not eventually tell us about it. C'mon, you know you want to!
It's always a little sad when a great story comes to an end, so anything that keeps it going a little longer is fine by me. Thanks for a great story!
| Strike Justice 11/7/11 . chapter 30
This was a lovely chapter. I'm sure that Victoria's going to get her true confession soon enough. Sorry it took so long to review.
| Motherduk 11/7/11 . chapter 30
Oh pleeeeease don't end this story here. It has to go on :-) So having said that I can't wait for the next chapter!
| Kali 11/6/11 . chapter 30
No way had you better end this story here. I may not be the best about posting a review but I just might come and find you for that! Great chapter. Dwayne is such a deep soul that I can just imagine the storm behind his eyes but he is so good for Victoria and brings her out of that shell.
| 11111111111111111111111 11/6/11 . chapter 30
ok I really liked it but sappy romantic that I am he has to say the words first before they sleep together, so glad they didn't!
Also I know you like your man of mystery but before they become more intimate surely he should tell her what it is from his past? I guess I'm nosey and can't wait to understand MG.
Absolutely loved it, hope you can have the time to write the rest of it, I'm sure it will be amazing.
If writes I will be reading it, so if she's reading this take it as a nudge! Not really my usual reading material but I will give it a go if it involves these great characters.
| Sussie 11/6/11 . chapter 30
Well this story just took away a few too many hours of my life but it was well worth it.
Even it might be a bit cliché it was well executed and well, I think nobody minds those stories? Especially with protective marines and a character we could easily imagine being ourselves...yeah, I just dreamed a little during this story...
uhm, right, I was reviewing a story.
So I think I'd very much like to see more of this story but only if you feel you can keep this quality up. Wouldn't want you to fall down a plothole because you were chased by a mob of wild fans. Not that I'd be one of them...
| StoryLover 11/6/11 . chapter 30
Once again beautifully written... I just love these two together... And no you do not need to ask YES please write more :):)
And a smutty chapter by RoryFaller will also be appreciated...
| Britt 11/6/11 . chapter 30
I LOVE THIS STORY! no! no! continue on my friend! keep those fingers typing away, I need to know more! I really do love these two characters, the way you write them… just everything!
| Stampiej 11/6/11 . chapter 30
you should at least give us a hint of smuttiness and some further cuteness:) in my opinion though!
As always good work!
| Nausicaa2301 11/6/11 . chapter 30
You did great with this chapter, their restrained nature and fears showing in their reactions. Fortunately she got the guts to confront him, he would have avoided her indefinitely thinking she was afraid and disgusted.
Lol at the last part of the chapter, just so funny!
You answered your own question, you can’t stop now, a family meeting should be very interesting given how she talks about her brothers!:D
| msdarque 11/6/11 . chapter 30
Informative and great chapter.
It would indeed be a bit unfair/mean to end it here. I'd SO want to read more! :D
| hifield 11/5/11 . chapter 30
Very nice scene for our two awkward sweethearts. You've done a really nice job with these two OCs and I'm thoroughly enjoying the story.
| Shadows-of-Realm 11/5/11 . chapter 30
RoryFaller's gonna be at it again? She just can't control herself can she, :P?
Loved the chapter. Thought the emotion was great, and yes... you thought correctly: it continues!