I know you have finished this so it's not relevant here but I personally like short chapters - I actually get enough time to read them! Please tell me the two scientists get what's coming to them - they are very annoying characters and very well written :) xxxx

I love your filler chapters :) and your sense of humour - this one made me laugh. Poor Lorne looks like Victoria is not the best person to keep a secret :) love that she says what she is thinking. Makes her feel more real. Xxx

I loved that chapter. I do like that Victoria can stand up against their banter. It makes a refreshing change. And now she knows Gunny is available too. Can't wait for the next chapter. Xxx

You really do like to torment poor Victoria! She didn't get her breakfast, got star struck meeting Teyla and Ronon and now you have locked her in with the Marines! I'm surprised the poor girl hasn't fainted yet! Loving it :) xxxx

You just love to mix it up! Poor Victoria :( love how she sometimes speaks what she is thinking. I love those "oops did I just say that out loud?" momemts. Really good chapter xxxx

That was great and yes Richards is a little different but that's because he has a bigger roll in this story. I like how you are handerling him. Looking forward to more xxx

I had forgotten what a great character Richards is and how very well you write him. Love the inter reaction between the characters and already I have connected with Victoria and want to see what happens to her. Here's hoping for a quiet weekend of reading! Xxx

I have suddenly got the urge read read stories with OC characters in them having just read a fantastic one. I thought I would give this one a go and I have a feeling it's definitely not going to disappoint :) xxxxx

Amazing story! Loved reading every word of it! Great work!

I love this story sooo much! It is brilliantly written and wonderful in every sense of the word. What is Below Deck season one about? I really really want Gunny's PoV!
Write soon!

So many great lines here that I don't even know where to start. Great ending to an epic story. You tied everything up nicely, while still leaving it open for a sequel.
Very much enjoyed seeing Victoria and Dwayne in a domestic scene and liked seeing a new side of Dwayne with Will. The man needs to turn the phone OFF. Maybe Victoria will turn it off for him...
I'd love to read more about Dusty and Will, but I'm NOT giving you another plot bunny! They're together and that's enough.

from Brn- "Is silence a good thing?" Victoria questioned.
"Not for our new couch," - OMG! I can't stop laughing and that pic in my head! Great Story!

from Brn - Sooo beautiful :)) such a love story!

from Brn - I love all the banter between Victoria and her family.. makes me remember why I moved half way across the country from my fam.. LOL if I could only get to Atlantis I would be home safe! :P

From Brn - Sorry its been awhile, this story was 1st of my list to catch-up.. I am rolling here,, with the trip home.. - "I'm sorry, Dwayne. My youngest was dropped on his head too many times as a baby," her father offered as he glowered at his youngest son.- still cracking up! and -"Either wants me dead or wants grandchildren… soon," - yep ROFLOL!