Cute, but it could have used more detail.

Good start, though! Keep at it!

that was sweet :)

Besides it seeming to be rushed it was descent.

Short and sweet. People forget thet not all cute FanFics have to be 6 chapters long. Keep up the cute work!

Helloo... An alright 3x3 I suppose, but I have to admit from what I've read of it, Yakumo doesn't seem very in character... I have a hard time imagining him being so bold. There were also a couple of grammatical/spelling/typing type errors, but overall this is an excellent start to a story... but a difficult stand-alone.

LC

story's conception: i bet you were bored then...

Sorry but I didn't like it at all!

Very nice

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I'm not really a big fan of really short fics. I love the romance, but such a thing would take more time, I think. I still thought it was good, but they have eternity to tell each other...don't you think he might want to wait a little to figure out how to say it right or something? _ just my stupid opinion. You don't have to listen to me.
heh...
Kitsune Ria

Short and lovely, good job.

*Sniff* That was sweet. It was kinda short though, I'd gladly read more if you posted more chapters. Keep up the good work. Abayo.

D-sythe

Short and rushed, much like this review. Please work on character development, for the love of God!

This is so sweet, I can totally imagine this happening, its so cute. Please keep writing, I'd love to read more of your stuff

Dude,

That was awsome. Short, but awsome. Write MORE!

::TEAR:: THAT WAS SO SWEET... sorry not much to say but AHHHH ITS WAS SOOOOOO SWEET