aweeessoommee*:.｡. o()o .｡.:*

That was beautiful.

I just found this story and not only do i love the way you described every thing but you used on of my favourite poems !

La Belle dams sans Merci ; the beautiful lady with no mercy.

Oh i love tht poem ! 3

Wonderful job EXCELLENT!

This story is addicting. I've read it twice in the past half-an hour.

Ahh, Von cherrmoniro, that was exquiset, ahh i hope that you write a sequel

Is there gonna b more chapters 2 this story?

Damn, way to combine my favorite things EVER :T Hetalia, Fruk, AND Vampires? How could I ever ask for more? Not to mention it's absolutely lusciously written, so seductive and sexy and unf. You really feel the desire and the spellbound hawtness that only vampire!sex can achieve hehe. I enjoyed this immensely!

sudden sticky sensational

pause dead still, brought to a halt, brought up better

by some intolerable agony

like eating something sharp

way at the back of your mind

in the morning

and he stands, stock still, statue still,

frozen in the middle

of a busy highway.

it thrashes its wings in impotent rage,

battering the walls of its golden cage...

.

.

[is it just me, or did you read Interview With A Vampire recently...?]

This was so delicious it reminded me of dark chocolate ! Bitter but tastes just right! I enjoyed reading it very much and your ending describing Paris...:3 Love!

i... i have no words 2 describe how beautiful this story was. i must admit it did confuse me at some parts. (if france isnt human.. what is he? and y is he broken?) but it flowed so effortlessly, and made me feel so many different emotions. thank you for writting this. you are an amazing author.

-Matty

This fanfiction is truly a treat for dark, sadistic minds and perhaps people with vampiric and shounen-ai fetishes... Anyway, I like it. It's of pretty medium length. Not too short

that it seems unfinished, not too long that it seems neverending. Just perfect. I felt it seemed to be sort of repitive with the continual bloodsucking but then again, that

just could have been Arthur's insatiable lust for Francis' blood and a method of building tension. Either way works.

I liked the way you ended it. It was like a sudden climax and then a slow denounement. Very nice.

PS: If Francis wasn't a mortal, nor was he a vampire, what was he?

HOLY F...! *O*

Super awesome fic! I'm speechless! Oh, God, sexiness! *dies*

OMFG! England is one SEXED motherfucker as a vampire! 3

this is winn!

the pain, the passion, the oh so enjoyable pleasure!

FUCKIN AWESOME! 3 D

This was wonderful! I love how descriptive it is and I liked how Francis was so willing to please his lovers even if it meant the death of him. Arthur's obsession was well written. I liked how Francis chose to go with him at the end of the story, also that was a great poem.

*stares blankly, unable to possibly sum up mind frame for anything more* You...aaah...holy fuuuuuuuuuuck...

And THAT is how you fucking write vampire romance! Shiiiiiiiiiittttttt! i'm completely astounded right now. i can hardly collect my thoughts to string a straight sentence. just...damn! DAYUM!

I applaud, simply applaud. i might just faint if I try for more. .A.:.M.:.A.:.Z.:.I.:.N.:.G.