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| Melissajennifermancini 2008-06-07 ch 1, | abuseWow this was really good! I loved it |
| MJ-Skywalker 2007-11-24 ch 1, | abuseAw! How adorable. This is really what I think Star Wars should've ended up like sometimes. This will be on my favorites list. Great story! MJ-Skywalker |
| Peace Like a River 2007-10-21 ch 1, | abusePlay cards, lol... The hyperactive twins are priceless! :) Love how Anakin handled -or rather, didn't handle- them. |
| Julie Horwitz 2007-06-18 ch 1, | abuseI just discovered this series today and it is absolutely priceless! Poor Anakin! Luke and Leia are little monsters! And of course Padmé is the only one that can handle them! Great stuff! (I'm glad you included Jar Jar in your universe. There is too much hatred going around for the poor guy!) I hope you will be writing more of these adorable "what could have been" tales! |
| Almyra 2007-05-22 ch 1, | abuseOh, my gosh, that was so cute. I loved it - poor Ani, being run ragged. Hee hee! Great job! |
| OlasDelMar 2007-02-27 ch 1, | abuseo, hyperactive twins! I loved it! this was great. You just feel so bad for Anakin as he goes through it... fantastic job! |
| LadyLapisLazuli 2007-01-31 ch 1, | abuseThat was so cute! Luke and Leia certainly are a handful, poor Anakin and Padme... :) |
| Shewhodanceswithdragons 2006-07-21 ch 1, | abuseHa ha, the dads always think it's easy taking care of kids till they have to do it by themselves. |
| Kenobifan 2006-02-27 ch 1, | abuseThat was a wonderful, enjoyable and funny story. Thanks for taking the time to write it. :) |
| nightwinde 2006-02-22 ch 1, | abuseOw... my stomach hurts from laughing... great job! |
| DiamondOfTheMoon 2006-02-22 ch 1, | abuseThis was really cool. Much Shorter then I expected and then again was did read Force Bond. This is still good and I am moving on with your other story. |
| Gandalf -Dumbledore -Obi-Wa... 2006-02-07 ch 1, | abuse“Can’t Jar Jar handle it?” *twitch* They were silent for precisely three seconds. *snickers* poor, poor Anikin... “Look, we’ll flip this spoon,” Anakin said, “Face down, it’s spaceships, face up, it’s dresses.” “What if it lands on its side?” Leia asked. “Then we go home,” Anakin said. He tossed the spoon in the air. It came down in his food. Luke and Leia squealed with laughter. hehehehehe... “How would you feel if their mother had died, hmm?” Anakin said, “I bet you wouldn’t be so quick to judge me then!” *laughs hysterically* The twins began to cry harder, Leia sounding especially distraught. Anakin tried with all his strength to ignore it. He lasted three seconds before crumbling under the torture. *snickers* “And candy!?” Luke asked, tears drying up instantly. SOMEONE'S a faker... “No!” Anakin moaned, “You kids! You’ll make me –“ “- turn to the Dark Side one of these days!” the twins finished in unison. i LOVE that line! ^^ PS if my calculations are correct (and they won't be, cuz i suck at math), Leia and Luke said some form of the phrase 'Dad, watch me!' approximately 17, 384 times. |
| pottersparky 2005-09-14 ch 1, | abuseCool like all your stories. Keep writing. |
| calsax 2005-08-16 ch 1, | abusePlay cards? Yeah, right! Beautiful story here. |
| Sparky 2005-07-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat it Anakin seek help before kids put you in a funny farm with all other poor fathers who need long rest because kids drive them up wall to. I feel so sorry for you, well lest you have padme think the force for that. |