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KiramekiUtau 7/11/11 . chapter 1
Totally support this pairing too! I like your story, it's nice!

Can I suggest something though? Lavi is a bit OOC. Just a bit. He's usually snarky, teasing, but really very kind. Just a suggestion! And, you should probably make this M... maybe? I dunno. But it's nice!

Kirameki Kae-chii
nouveaulove 5/2/11 . chapter 1
amazing!
poochie2poochie33 3/28/11 . chapter 1
soooooo hooottt!
lavaloner 12/20/10 . chapter 1
This was amazing. I'm so reading everything you've ever written.
Hafous 12/9/10 . chapter 1
omg! This was so lovely.
Indiahenna 11/14/10 . chapter 1
That was really good! I love this couple so much.
Here for Now 11/12/10 . chapter 1
Just delightful. This pairing has sort of taken over my fiction-life, and it is just wonderful to find stories-like this one-that have everything just right. I love that Lavi quietly, so quietly, longs for Lenalee, knows that he can't do anything about it, and deals with it in his own lonely way. And the end... "for-goddamn-ever"... I squee'd a little.
Konoha's White Fang 9/18/10 . chapter 1
Kyaa! That was amazing! I adore Lavi X Lenalee and really hate Allen so you've totally made my day. At first, I was really depressed but after reading the ending, I'm all happy and giddy :P

Great work! Have a great day.

KWF
lavilena 9/13/10 . chapter 1
I love this. So hot, I love these two. I wish Lenalee would be with Lavi... instead of liking Allen. Lavi and her is much better pairing in my opinion.
DreamScene 9/8/10 . chapter 1
Haven't given much thought to this pairing, but I love how this story puts them together in such a realistic and longing manner. I love how Lavi pines after her.

It's sweet and a little funny and a little heartbreaking. Total win.
Le Requiem 9/5/10 . chapter 1
HOT.

period.

no other words would suffice.
razbliuto 8/3/10 . chapter 1
Oh WOW this is gorgeous.

Everything is brilliant, especially the end. Oh my goodness the END. In ISRAEL. And - and LENALEE. I THINK YOU JUST GAVE LAVI A WHOLE NEW LEVEL OF HOT, WHICH SHOULD BE IMPOSSIBLE. BUT YES.

I loved it
snappleducated 7/28/10 . chapter 1
So I have decided that you wrote this just for me because I love it so effing much.

Am I right or am I right?
That Vintage Dress 7/28/10 . chapter 1
I loved how much justice you did their chemistry. :) It was a great read, I really enjoyed it.
yumho 7/28/10 . chapter 1
lavi and lenalee are the best dgray couple ever!

and your story waas just awesome. you have great description!

there needs to be more lavi-lena stories around. (nudges)

keep up the great work. ;)
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