wow. is the best story I've ever read. I hope we look back and that one day you decide to continue it. however, many compliments is really beautiful
Umm Name 8/22/08 . chapter 13
Yo i never like read this tuff before but your story rocked man, like no joke. I was never a big fan of like fanfics but you took everything to a whole nother level with you stories. I think you should continue on your discontinued one "State of Mind", it was really good honestly, i know this is like 4 years overdue but if you're like still online or like write anything anymore you should at least write an ending. Like make yamato fall head over heals for taichi, and maybe make something about taichi's past slip out at school and everyone begins to think of him oddly, probably not daisuke or takeru unless they're going to highschool? Whateve's I'm sure if you like the story enough you'll come up wit somethingg. I seriously think that you should at least maybe write one more chapter for an ending, just to like end it, give it some kind of like way to conclude everything so I'm not tottally left with questions unanswered. God I can't beleive I went four fucking years without even knowing that there was something called "fan fiction". Well whatever I'm gonna be like tottally goin on this site more nd stuff, I hope you finish the story! (Oh yeah as far as like reviewing goes: from 1 to 10 I'g give this fic a perfect 10 as my review, I'm not a tough critic at all). Oh yeah btw I think Sachi is like tottally awesome like with that part in the last chapter where he's like can i keep takeru? I thought that was hilarious. So awesome. Okay well I'm just gonna finish this with a "That was the most awesome fanfic I ever read" so... that was the most awesome fanfic I ever read... please continue it!
I love this story. The way you have the characters act and react to each other seems extremely realistic. I also feel severe pity for you on the subject of exams. Well it is summer now so I'm happy (Also went through exams. First-time too) I did amazing on mine, Got a 92 on my english exam! _
I must say, I was quite shocked to find this fic left to the discontinued pile. Ok well, not shocked persay, but you understand... I hope... Anyway, I'm posting this to not only tell you what an amazing writer you are and how much I loved your fic, but possibly persuaid you to write more. Well, here we go. :3
I must say this honesly: I am almost litterally obsessed with this fic. No, not the kind of obsessed you get in most fics where they're just trying to sweet talk you into updating; litterally obsessed. I got no sleep last night, as I was too busy reading this. I was absolutely determind to finish it, and I actually did! At 4:30 A.M... Even so, when the fic stopped (though I wish it hadn't), the thoughts didn't. When I finally went to sleep at 6:30 (the two hours in between were spend daydreaming about your fic and how it might continue), I fucking dreamed about this fic! I kid you not, I was having dreams about this wonderful thing you call a fic. O.o;; Honestly, I'm so into this fic that it's almost scary...
On to an actual reveiw!
When I first came across this fic, I wasn't expecting anything too great. Just the usual, mediocore stuff. But even after the very first sentence, I was glued to the screen. Hell, I didn't even eat dinner normally or sleep I was so caught up in this fic!
Everything about this fic is wonderful. The heart clenching emotion; the gut wrenching character background; the suprisingly good chaacter development that doesn't seem too rushed, but not too slow either; the wonderfully realistic quality to the fic; and most all, the wonderful, delicious detail you have in this fic that makes everything come alive and gets the scenes to playing in frong of you eyes like a movie.
The writing was very fluid too. It wasn't choppy and boring at all, but rather very smooth and exillerating! Your word choices were extremely wonderful, and even with the big, confusing words, it all just seemed to flow together. I'm not too good with my limited vocabulary and it sometimes seems as though I'm trying too hard with my words, but with this... oh gods it was just lovely! Everything just seemed to fit; like pieces to a puzzle. I was on the edge of my seat and glued to the screen nearly the entire tim. I think the only reason I even moved from my computer was to use the bathroom...
This fic entranced me: I felt emotions similar to the characters; laughing wen they did, growing fearful when they did, feeling nervous when something new came up, and even feeing the need to cry when the characters did. You don't know how long it's been since I've actually felt that much emotion... And it was because of this fic and your wonderful, envy inspiring writing skills. You and this fic are just amazing.
I abslolutely envy you. I may be still young, but if I may brag, I am a fairly decent author. But you... you just surpass me in the writing field. The detail you use is amazing, as I have said before. And the emotion you put into this is trilling. It has been forever since I have seen an author as talented and awe-inspiring as you. I definately feel unworthy even typing this review. I guess that is why I have to put in no effort as I write this review; which I still feel is too short. I guess that's what happens to me when I find something exceptionally good among the piles of worthless, uninteresting fanfics.
I... I know that you haven't planned on updating anytime soon, but it would be the world to me if you would. I'm not very good at persuation, but I can try. I love this fic so much, you have no idea. I can't believe how much I'd be willing to give just to see another wonderful chapter of this. When I found out this was being discontinued (I didn't read the summary correctly the first time... ;;) I felt almost ready to cry. I felt so down hearted that you wouldn't be updating this anymore that I just had to reveiw this. I'm almost scared to know that I won't be seeing another chapter of this.
Does that sund strange? Because it does to me. Le sigh, oh well I'll just have to wait and see if you respond to this... Please do, I'd love to see what you thought of me and my hopless fangirling of your writting.
Wow... I just kind of stumbled back here while looking for old digimon fics. I knew this hadn't been updated in a long time, but I had no idea you'd discontinued it. I have to say, I'll be sorry to see it unfinished, though I completely understand (having abandoned a story or two myself...). But, I'm glad you shared even this much of the story with us, it was always a wonderful read , if depressing at times xD;
brad 8/16/06 . chapter 13
wow i dnt normaly reveiw but your story was just so well writen and so sad, makes me wonder y u wrote about this subject was it from something that happend to u? or from the news or something like that.u had me with tears in my eyes half the time and smileing the rest. the story so far is just so sweet and cute and if its possible could i get an email when a new chapter is up i just cnt wait to read the next part. your truly one of the few writers that have gone from being just good to being tryly great at what u are doing, thanks brad
Oh for the love for all that is cat! update damnit! It's been over a year and this story is just that awsome! I will hunt you down and chain you to your computer chair if you don't update soon!
OMG! This fanfic equals amazing. I love it to death. It's very good. Please, continue! Update! I know it's been almost two years, but still! It's too good to waste! Please, continue, or at least tell us how it ends!
YugiYamiforever 5/18/05 . chapter 13
Please, Please, Please continue with this story. I have been waiting for an update and i really hope that you write more. I love how its written and the story line. Its so different from the other stories that i have read.
Keep up the great work and i hope to see another chapter soon, dont give up on this story...its great so far
That was glorious! Amazing! I can't believe that you stopped writing it. You probably wouldn't continue. But I thought maybe I could inspire you if I put in a review. I think that maybe after the guys are a little less afraid that one or more of them should run in to one of their old semi frequent customers. I think that would be pretty interesting to write and read. Like it could be someone unpredictable like some successful businessman or even like Ken-chan's Dad or something like that! The man wouldn't have to do anything really at all the boys would probably just have to see them and the man might even say hi or something but nothing that indicated his guiltiness. Also, I don't know if you're still thinking about make Takeru Daisuke and Ken all together but I think you should. I know you mentioned that someone said that Ken would have a hard time taking care of both of them. But Ken wouldn't be the only one taking care of them Yamato will still take care of Takeru and Taichi will still help them both, not only that but Daisuke and Takeru have each other to support and look to for support and they can help each other more since they understand what they've both been too.
Anyway I loved the fic so far and I realized its been like two years since you continued but I've picked up a fic that I hadn't worked on in a year or so and I'm not sure if the direction I took it is what I had planed but I liked how it turned out so you should think about it
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