|Reviews for Crawl from the Chasm|
| DDSG-1Fan 4/6/13 . chapter 1
Every time I read this story, I want to tell you how much I love it! Angst and ship perfectly executed. I can see the wet grass, hear the jogger and her dog, see the moonlight glinting... You are so talented with your writing and you capture Sam and Jack perfectly. I always wanted a sequel to this one. Do you think you could write a sequel sometime soon? :-)
| Guest 10/28/12 . chapter 1
Must have sequel! AkamaiMom, you rule with this story! The characters are spot on. The dialogue is perfect. The imagery brings the reader right in to the setting. I can hear the jogger jingling and feel the wetness from the dewdrops. Can't you have a sequel (or a second chapter?) wherein Sam doesn't drive off but instead turns around and goes back to Jack? Or where Jack doesn't let her drive off after all? I just love your stories and this one is so well written. Thanks for writing!
| sci-figirly 6/5/12 . chapter 1
Whoa... I agree with everything DeltaLutra said. Definitely had to remember to breathe a couple times. Fantastic!
| DeltaLutra 4/21/12 . chapter 1
This absolutely took my breath away. The tension was incredibly tangible the whole way through. You used some very clever dialogue, that really rang true to the characters, and the whole thing was just a delight to read :)
| majorsal 6/9/11 . chapter 1
oh... so, so beautiful and poetic!
bring them together!
thank you and well done! ;)
| SaraBahama 5/28/11 . chapter 1
That. was. awesome!
Thanks Aka! Oh the overwhelming angstyness! Twisted my heart...but the resolution was sweet. Carry on.
| Zeki Young 12/28/10 . chapter 1
There are a lot of post-Abyss pieces out there. This is probably hands-down the most honest to the characters I've come across so far. While I've enjoyed other fics that have had them find more physical comfort with one another, your portrayal of possible events to my mind feels real. The dialogue is right on, and as always with these two, so much is said in a hug.
Thanks for sharing this wonderful piece of writing!
| taichi9 9/3/10 . chapter 1
I love this story, it's so perfectly them. I'm sitting in my office getting teary eyed. I can actually picture them on his front step awkward in only the Jack/Sam way that they can be. Just deliciously angsty and perfect. Please write more!
| DDSG1Fan 8/20/10 . chapter 1
Really enjoyed your story! Well-written and great characterizations.
| Hockey17 8/14/10 . chapter 1
Oh so angsty bit oh so good
| musical-aven 8/1/10 . chapter 1
Hi! Love your angst fanfictions! You should write more of those hehe ;)
| LaraSGCLena 8/1/10 . chapter 1
Wow, really loved this one. Just because you have this ability to make them both human within their faults and their oddness towards each other. I loved the last part where they're "running" from the intimacy. Funny thing, happened to me a couple of weeks ago...I'm dating him now - it's complicated but it really made me smile reading this story :) Thanks!
| Moosepath01 8/1/10 . chapter 1
You did this very well. Angst can be hard to write, and sometimes hard to read. Some stretch it too far and the story borders on ridiculous. But this felt right. Both characters are hurting and in that state inadvertently hurt the other. Thank goodness for the the two passersby that forced our couple to "count to 10" before they lost the situation.
Your descriptions made me feel I was there, feet wet in the grass, hearing the padding of the overweight lab. Well done!
| Zoser 7/31/10 . chapter 1
I absolutely loved this story until the jogger and her dog came back and ruined everything! Great work!
| hilandncr 7/30/10 . chapter 1
Angsty and sexy. I like it. ;)