Dominatrix NANOHA FTW! XD GAWD that was awesome... and Vivio losing.. i loved that! It makes sense after all but Einhart's avenge will be oh so sweet! 3 XD

Hi,

Really nice action chapter :D.. Go Einhart :P kick the bastard ass.. Aww.. Nanoha and Vivio finally made peace :D..

Bye Tish

Beat that ass to hell Ein-chan! i wanna kill him GAHHHH DAM ME BEING A 3D PERSON lol awsome chapter by the way but still kill him Ein-chan no one does that 2 vivio

beat the piece of shit!. ahaha anyway please continue to write..

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE Do a follow up chapter showing Einhart-chan creaming Alex.

Lexus has been bubbled out, though an additional good kick in the nuts woud've been great.

I don't know what Einhart did to the bastard that hurt Vivio, but I know for sure it won't be a pretty sight. XD

Well, well, soldier...

This was interesting!

LOL at the burrito. Nanoha, you PHAIL! LOL Nah, not really. :3

And the tournament. That was very interesting, indeed.

The Mother beat and humiliated the Master, but the Apprentice took the Daughter down. DDDDDD: Damn! A

I hate Vivio-Bashing, but it was the greater good. And by "greater good", I mean this line here: ""But I want to know how Einhart-san is doing." At that moment there was a loud explosion and a slight tremble in the ground followed closely by a loud scream of agony.

Nanoha smiled. "I think she's doing just fine.""

THAT was...(Very evil smirk)

And of course, the Mother-Daughter moment was...*O*

Helluva job! Keep it up!

Update ASAP!

Semper-Fi! Carry on!

Damn you Gi jerk! T_T Vivio deserved to win, though the fight really got my full attention in.

I'm looking forward to see Einhart beat him :)

Great story !

Kida Luna.

"I think she's doing just fine." Hahah. Oh gosh, scary stuff. Another wonderful addition I enjoyed. Nanoha did well in not responding. I think everyone reading was expecting a starlight breaker on that jerk. Anywho! Great chapter, love love love your story, and cannot wait for the next update. :)

Man...bunch of jerks for sparring partners.

You have a great variety of NanoFate and Vivio stories, so I don't really have anything to review for you! Just encouragement to keep writing your stories, especially this one.

Great job again and I hope to see it continue

Wow. This chapter was steamier than your sequel to Diamond Dust. I love the interaction between Nanoha and Fate!

This was an awesome chapter with the right amount of drama. I'm glad that Nanoha and Vivio's problem now nanofate will resolve theirs. Amazing as always update soon

Isn't vivio lying to nanoha? Y does nanoha always have to adjust to vivio wen clearly vivio is lying to her mother.? Btw, great work

whoa nose bleed :P poor nanoha she didn't know that her daughter is learning so much so little time... lol if she ever find out...dun dun dun dun..