Really, really nice. One thing i tend to enjoy about your writing is that your ideas are so creative. And this idea was definitely creative, good job! I really liked this fic.

This piece is just incredible. It ties in the two games extremely well. It coincides well, but not perfectly with the information we are given in CC and CT. But an interesting concept, none the less.

It's such a powerful piece, I don't how to give it enough credit. Probably the best thing I've read on FanFic to date.

Astounding. Unbelievable. The utter ingenuity...to make such a strange relationship plausible, to make the events plausible, to have Fate screaming in his, and then his, head over and over, and Lucca showing her ability to care for something inhuman, (as well as pointing out her own flaws) tying in both games without flaw and without error. This, put simply, is a masterpiece. Congratulations.

wow.

convoluted, that's what this is. a convoluted fic for an already too-convoluted video game storyline. :D i'm amazed, to say the least! lynx and lucca...who would've thought? very, very original, too. hmm... i find the title itself to be very interesting because if memory serves me right, didn't that fortuneteller from termina say the same thing of kid? something like "in your eyes, i perceive the look of a beauty and a beast". *shakes head* WOW. _

keep writing!

I was just looking at some stories, and happened upon this little gem...very captivating, start to finish. Liked it a lot _

A very interesting twist, though unless I'm misunderstanding something your explanation for Kid doesn't mesh with the Chrono continuity. Still, your characterizations of Lynx and Lucca were terrific, and this is story gets points for sheer originality. You've done a great job pairing up two characters that one usually wouldn't even imagine in a romantic situation with each other.

Thats the 2nd excellent story I read other was called Chrono's enslavement I think, read it, its good.

Awesome! A different twist to the Lynx story. It's kind of ironic the way you wrote Lynx as being Serge's father twice...the original Lynx and then the Wazuki Lynx. I thought this piece was beautifully written. It's a deviation from the norm and I like that. Great job!

Hey! That's a really nicely done story ya got there. It's funny to write about Lynx, especially when he's not trying to destroy El Nido or something like that. Great job, you should write more stories.

That's really interesting. It would be ironically funny for Serge and Kid to turn up siblings. Not to mention I always felt kinda sorry for Lynx

I liked this alot, good job.