that was adorable! that would have been really funny and cute if it really happened too. :)

Very cute! I could so seeing this happen! :) Great job!

I literally had the video in my head playing so I couldn't help the laughs while reading, I almsot let the video play in the background xD

This. Was. GREAT!

I love the idea and the whole story is just plain epic

Somehow I just stumbled upon this- too cute! Really loved their reading at Comic Con and this story :)

soo...after spending the better part of that story in tears of laughter...i screamed and cheered...THAT WAS BLOODY BRILLIANT! LOVED IT! i had tears running down my face i was laughing so much at one point!

and i was listening to the clip of them reading it, and i know the clip off by heart movements and all...and so it was soo funny...and i had all the screaming fans and it was like i was in the room.

Love NCISchick xoxoxo

Oh this is BRILLIANT. I loooove it! The Comic-Con reading was hysterical! But this is better, because of the ending. :D

glad it is so hot here i can blame the weather instead off your story why im red in the face :P great story very believeable i can just see the smug smile on castles face anyway thankyou for brightening my day

haha really coool 3

'She could have to apologize to Alexis for shoving her tongue down her father's throat while she was present.'

hahahaha, i loved their little 'act', so cute! great story, as usual, i loved it!

OH. my goodness. This story is positively awesome! I literally "squee"-ed when Esposito suggested the name change ;) Yayyyyy!

That was an awesome. I could so see everyone watching them with gaping mouths.

omg awesome! I love that part of the panel lol

likelikelikelike!

LOVED this! I loved when Nathan and Stana read page 104. If only, if only. :D Soooo good. On my favorite's list.

great story!