Hey, it's me again, I just can't resist reading this all over again, I'm patiently waiting for another update, so please do update!

You're one of my favorite authors, indeed!

I wonder what you'll do next or what kind of story you'll surprise everyone with, hum? But whatever it will be, I'm sure that it will be great like this story :D

You play into the minds of the characters quite well, and I'm definetly looking forward to the chapters to come. _

With that said...hurry and update! I need some good 'ol ADD distraction from homework, and your story is just the thing! D

It's very comprehendable indeed, I don't compare to your excellence, a very well job.

I hope you'll update and make other crack pairings, you've got the talents to be an exceptional writer.

Work hard so that you may achieve greatness from your stories and let the readers enjoy it as much as I did.

Splendid work indeed, fantastic!

And if you have time, do you mind reading my stories and I will be eternally greatful for your constructive critism which I will take gladly to better myself.

Good luck!

Wow this was amazing. Very nice job, you portrayed Tamao and Yaya so accurately, and with such excellent description. Nice story and I can't wait for the next chapter!

Wow! A very nice chapter indeed First off, I absolutely adore YayaxTsubomi, so I hope you take it all the way with them :3

Second: I love the way you describe Yaya's feelings. I'm never much of a thoughts-person myself, but you're really good at it I'll be waiting for the next chapter (:

Man, that was great to read, well...I got to retire for the night. But do update! :)

You contemplated every single emotions perfectly and sentence sentence it was purely complex and well developed. You've stunned me a lot with your grammar precision and made my drowsiness fade away with a single read. This story is really magnificent and has woken me up clearly, I hope that you will be able to update this as soon as you have enough allotted free time for you.

Good luck_!

very well written i think. Nice moments in time to roam the mind of Tamao. I like this style you used, and find the time-line you are basing the material off of, very interesting as well. a great point which I haven't read many stories of before. One can tell you have an affection for the characters, and it is nice. Thanks. i will keep my eyes on this.

Hmh, though Yaya and Tamao really is a crack pairing (for me at least), I liked the story so far. I think you did good with describing Tamao's thoughts too, really realistic. And good ol' Chikaru So caring, she was really in character.

All in all, good job. Looking forward to the next chapter.