Haha. This is cool. I like the whole flashcards scene. I know it's a reference to some show, but I forget which. Still love the story so far.

Haha. This is cool. I like the whole flashcards scene. I know it's a reference to some show, but I forget which. Still love the story so far.

Hmmm... seems Hamsterviel ain't too thrilled at Angel right now... would Angel actually eat him up? She'd likely get very ill big time.

I think you did a pretty good job at tying up the loose ends. It looked like you covered what happened to everyone, and I can't think of any plotlines you left unanswered.

Excellent work as always, my friend. Keep it up.

Zim'sMostLoyalServant signing off.

Just to clarify, you did say this story is slightly AU from the rest of your timeline, right? Because that would explain how Tak is dead in this - especially since Darth's the one who killed her. Though I felt you did a good job on the emotion in that scene.

And I liked the final confrontations with the villains. Nick's battle with Samael was a good example of compassion winning over hate no matter what, Grey's encounter with Eva was nicely emotional, and Junior's confrontation with Jack really showed just how pathetic his brand of evil is (and it was nice touch to have him really defeat himself there).

Keep up the good work.

Zim'sMostLoyalServant signing off.

Loved Naomi's talk about dragons. So like original Naomi, it seems the Major Arcana version of her is just as religious?

I liked how Azazel was given the chance to redeem both himself and Miyu in the afterlife. Didn't you do a oneshot on DA about that quest? I remember Cloak being involved.

Anyway, as for the rest of the chapter, I liked the fight with the remaining Corporation members, especially how they distracted Samael, and how Green finally gave Zoburg the ending he deserved (if only for everyone's reactions to it). And I liked how Two switched sides and how Minimoose so easily figured out who he was - though I'm surprised at his death. I know he comes back cause he's in some of your DA stuff, so I'm curious to see how that happens.

I'm looking forward to the final battles.

Keep up the good work.

Zim'sMostLoyalServant signing off.

Hmmm... well that's one way to put a grocery store you don't like out of business for good. I'm sure Naomi might have been okay if it landed on her... though she'd likely have a big headache.

I liked the final confrontation with Miyu, and I find the fact that she's technorganic interesting (BTW, she wouldn't by any chance be the child of an AU Zim and MALIK the way Azazel's the son of AU Kila and Grey, would she?). On the other hand, I found the ending of the fight with Azazel a bit disturbing.

And interesting development with Grey - really can't wait to see what happens with that, or how the fight with Jack and his monster army goes.

As for the stuff at Star Command, I'm surprised to see Kila and Zim hiding there. Considering what's happening, that seems like really bad timing.

Keep up the good work.

Zim'sMostLoyalServant signing off.

I've got to give Jacques credit - he knows how to go out with a bang. Though I don't get why he fused his soul with Rupert and erased himself; why can't anyone remember him?

In any case, speaking of Rupert, I liked how he fought off Kaiser and that thing made from Legion's family, and got Skoodge and Vassago to help him.

Meanwhile, I'm not sure if I'm getting this - was Samael intentionally planning to unleash the Vorago, or was that just a side effect?

Keep up the good work.

Zim'sMostLoyalServant signing off.

That was unexpected for Azazel. Of course if Hamsterviel built the structure, he knows its vulnerability. I wonder what kind of speech Joshua will give when he returns to the UN in light of what happened. Hopefully Naomi will learn to trust Azazel concidering he did save her husband from certain death.

There is nothing worse then your enemy being a family member. Someone needs to show up now and put these villains in their place before something else happens.

First Ewa Lani, now Kila - Eva is acting like both of Grey's loves, huh? Be interesting to see how this develops.

And the development about the Minor Arcana was a bit unsettling. Though at least in Two's case it added a bit of depth to the character, especially with how he seems to regret it.

Keep up the good work.

Zim'sMostLoyalServant signing off.

Hmm, so what's the Corporation up to? Obviously destroying Jerusalem wasn't the objective of the plan, since they planted something there. Can't wait to see what the idea is.

And Rupert's quest seems to be heating up; what was Jay doing in Purgatory? And for that matter, what was Kaiser doing there? Shouldn't he be locked up in Leroy's subconscious or something?

Meanwhile, it's nice to see Jacques' conscience is still intact; if he were still a true villain, he wouldn't be offering Lilo an escape of sorts from Zoburg's plans.

And it's interesting how Grey's relationship with Eve is mirroring his past one with Ewa Lani. I get the feeling that isn't coincidence.

Keep up the good work.

Zim'sMostLoyalServant signing off.

Hmmm, Naomi is quite a character. Seems someone has a crush on her. I don't think Joshua will be too thrilled.