I really like this, but there are a lot of errors. You left out a word at the end, making the sentence confusing. You are also missing punctuation often at the end of dialogue and you misspell a few words, "then" specifically. Be careful that you put "than" where you mean it instead of "then".

You really are a good writer, though. I like this fic a lot!

It's slightly AU, but it's very sweet.

interesting,but can't say I can see it happening at that point in time. Considering the story has all of them being kicked out of Anatevka (not sure i have that spelled right), and Teyve going to America.