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| pokey 2008-03-24 ch 1,  | abuseBest AU highschool story I've ever read. |
| Amaya-Oneesama 2008-01-30 ch 18, | abuseAww. I wish I could read the ending to this story. |
| Jemzet A Heart Broken Angel 2007-10-14 ch 18, | abuseI liked it and I hope to read more from you...and also plz update |
| MULAN-IFUWEREGAY 2007-09-13 ch 18, | abuseupdate soon |
| katsheswims 2006-07-10 ch 18, anon. | abuseThis was great. I can see the parallels between this and the actual Inuyasha story. I hope that Inuyasha and Kagome begin speaking again. The Sango/Mirooku drama is good, too. But I really like Inuyasha/Kagome interaction. I can't wait to read the next chapter! |
| shessys girl 2006-05-01 ch 18, anon. | abuseya go shessy always in contor and demanding. just how i like em ~_^ |
| modelwalk 2006-04-15 ch 18, | abuseahh. you left with a cliffhanger! i totally love this story a bunch, update soon please? -- |
| Night Beauty 2006-02-26 ch 18, | abuseYou really need to update... please? |
| INUTASHY 2006-01-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseTHIS IS A GRAET STORY,IT SHOULD HAVE A SECTION IN INUYASHA YOKI LAIR.ALSO I THINK YOU SHOULD HAVE KIKIO DIE IN A CAR CRASH OR SOMTHING. |
| mocadacaru 2005-12-27 ch 11, anon. | abuseu should make somthing relly bad happen to kikio,so then kagome has o comfort inuyasha.like kikio get hit by a car,and die. |
| random person 2005-11-26 ch 2, anon. | abusehello! i like your story a whole lot, but i have one question for this chapter: osuwari does translate to sit in english, but is it not used ONLY for commands to DOGS in japanese? so was it intentional that kaede in here was basically treating inuyasha as a literal dog or was it something else? please don't kill me or feel bad, i really do enjoy your story so far but i was just wondering whether this was intentional or not? please respond soon! |
| Anime Chick009 2005-11-01 ch 18, | abusestrange to see the plot of Inuyasha in modern time is kinda werid but cool. Plz write more soon! |
| Goosegurl 2005-10-10 ch 1, | abuseYour writing isn't bad and you gave nice pictures of scenery...but MUST kagome ALWAYS meet and get angry at Inuyasha first and secondly be seated next to sango, who is immedietly friendly? -_- Its really kind of bland after awhile. Try to be a bit more inventive! Other than that its pretty good. Keep it up ^_^ |
| Lacey Beans 2005-10-10 ch 18, | abuseWow. Just wow. I'm so glad that I found this story. I've truly enjoyed reading it. I hope to see more from you soon. It would be a shame to not update this story anymore. I, for one, don't mind a deviation from the manga plot line. Really, isn't that what fan fiction is about? It's fan Fiction, it's meant to deviate a bit, and that's what makes it unique and interesting. You're plot is fascinating, and I can't wait for more! ~LaceyBeans~ |
| thanatos-daemon 2005-08-16 ch 5, | abusehey nana, last time i checked up on your stories you were up to 'tomodachi' and ive seen you've done heaps since then. this is a really good story and if not for mounds of h/w i'd be reading the later chapters now. thanks for your continued writing. cheers. |