This was so relieving to find, I know what you mean: I search for my fav pair of eight-some years and what do I find? Albeit fluffy and uber romantic (so cute!) I cant believe a game so popular in its prime has next to no yaoi for first gen. primary characters! -Tamaki mushroom corner-

Er. I mean, this is technically not bad, but it's a fragment. It's a tiny chunk of something that clearly needs a much bigger foundation. Run with this! Do it some justice! I admire anybody who thinks they can pull off a Dart/Lavitz, but go ahead and really pull it off! This is cute, and they have chemistry, but in reading this, I felt somewhat adrift. Where the hell are they? Why is Charle there? What's going on?

Still, not terrible!