I LOVED IT! TOTALLY AMAZING! I don't know if this was in your plans of not, but I think you should write more to this. :)

Sweet :D

Awwww! That was my frist reaction and I loved it.

that's so cute!

I love it!

good story

Aw! Loved it!

Diego just is too cute again! Actually his comment was as stupid as he cinsidered Sid's :p:p not for the thing he said but just because I never expected him to go into such a stupid discussion. Let such nonsense to Eddie , Crash and Sid :D:D:D

I LOVE IT!

Very lovely story. I did wonder before how she told him, with him having the ability to freak out so easily.

What an excellent story!

This was a very well written piece considering English is your second language, bravo :D. It was great fun to read, and it flowed really well! The thing that really stood out for me though was the fact that the dialogue was written almost flawlessly for each character; I could almost hear them saying those lines. For me, that is one, massive, unconditional Win :P

Am looking forward to beta-ing your stories!

Cheerio,

Trev

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA that was hillarious. my new story is open to reviews. please check my profile to see what it is.

Very nicely written, a short peice that I would suggest to others. I love how it was appropriate but not childish, it was straight on, and I loved it!

LOL...

"He really is a pervert" That made me laugh, but Crash and Eddie always did that to me, those stupid cocky little possums.

Hooray for the competitive uncles!

Great chapter. Wouldn't Ellie be pregnant for a year? Are you going to continue the story?

Why the heck did I wait so long to read this? This story is great. The setting is appropriate, the plot is fun and quirky, the pacing is outstanding and most importantly the characters are spot-on. Your writing style is so smooth and easy to read, I can't believe English is your second language. I'm a native English speaker, who admittedly knows no other language, and you're using legitimate words I've never heard of. For one thing I've never seen the word joey used in that context before, which is pretty scary because it's actually the correct terminology and that means I've got to go back and do a bit of editing on my own story now. (Woe the idiot I am.)

Yes, there's a couple of minor spelling errors but I couldn't care less. I only noticed them during my second read through anyway since I was too busy gleefully lapping up the storyline the first time.

Thanks for a quality read!

'Born 42/13/20x108,' A.J.