Great story! No OOC-ness either. I could totally see this happening in a never-going-to-happen sequel. Please update; I want to see how the townsfolk reacts when he comes walking back into town... Thanks for writing!

Good story. I liked how Chuck mentions how the dog like alien has no eyes because I never noticed.

I'm intrigued! Please continue! :)

Great start! I really like the atmosphere you've set up. Really working up sympathy for Chuck. I like that you're using the little... Alien dog thing too. He was cute/terrifying.

I eagerly await the next chapter!

That was really good so far, I know how itching to write something feels, I have a Planet 51 fic as well that I had this itch to write after seeing the movie for the first time, so I hope you R&R it but if not, I don't care. I hope you continue soon!

-Silver Azure