|Reviews for If on a Winter's Night|
| frekles 5/21/13 . chapter 31
OMG-best story EVER...It has had me captured for the past 5 days-reading as none stop as I could and still having a life! Cannot wait for the rest. You are a wonderful writer...so real...
| Princess Mishawaka 5/20/13 . chapter 31
It has literally taken me days to read this chapter. It was so agonizing and raw with pain that I couldn't do it except in paragraphs.
The guys can't be broken apart? I don't believe it. Yes everything leads to them having better lives with someone else but no this is Jasper and Edward and they are in love. No matter when you find true love you have to hold on and cherish it for as long as you can.
I am heart broken for them.
| Bumble-bee 5/18/13 . chapter 31
Oh... that's so sad. I could smack Edward! What an idiot! Jasper was everything to him... and he just threw him away because of some stupid kiss? Well, F.U Edward! Jasper was the best thing you ever had!
Sorry, that was my little rant :) lol. Brilliant chapter. Brilliant writing. I can't wait for the next one to come!
| Jasper-is-hot 5/19/13 . chapter 6
good story so far!
| TaraJo 5/16/13 . chapter 31
This was so heartbreaking, emotionally overwhelming chapter. My heart was with Jasper, going through his pain with him, but it can't be good for Edward either, poor boys. I just hope they find the strenght and courage to fight for each other, not give up, either of them. They surely deserve to be happy together.
| Justname 5/12/13 . chapter 31
Another great chapter!
I think Jasper is acting completely as he should. At some point their relationship needs to get back to where they are both equals. Both boys need to learn to give and take, not one give all of the time and the other take.
Thanks for updating.
| SubtlePen 5/12/13 . chapter 31
good lord, woman. i am utterly gutted after the lat 2 chapters. just gutted. :(
| jace4ever 5/12/13 . chapter 31
Oh how i loved this story. I have read these lines and thought i know how you feel edward. I had a car accident at 17. Only my boyfriend was the drunk driver. I suffered a compression fracture of the L2 L3 vertebre along with torn cartlidge of the rt knee and bruising to every organ in my body. Instead of sitting waiting for help i walked three miles to call for someone to pick us up and taken home and left until morning to seek medical help. I was so close to completly never walking again. Years in surgery, and braces and crying and wanting my life back. Many many years later still dealing with damage done to my body i can get his pain. But how do his parents ir jasper's parents not see they need help. Simeone needs to kick edward his ass and break his pity party. He is going to push away something so precious TRUE LOVE, for damn confusion and basically selfishness. He is being selfish for his needs and over looking Jaspers. Hypicritical too to judge jas for being able to walk and assuming he doesnt understand when he can understand more. Because he would truly give anything and everything for edward to walk again. Great story hard to type everything on a ohone that wanted to say. But hope you update soon.
| Deedlez01 5/11/13 . chapter 31
Oh no! Fight for him Jasper! Don't give up!
I hope you don't leave us hanging for too long.
Love this story so much. Great job!
| vpobi 5/11/13 . chapter 1
Hi :) ...i have to told you. ..i love this story! ..never i had cried so much by a fanfiction story. ...so wonderful written! ...have expected a gay thing like raw and rosy. ..but this is so overwhelmed and goes under skin. ...love it!
| Frankie Hale 5/7/13 . chapter 31
Okay I reviewed this before, but after taking the time to consider this. I won't how long this has been part of the plot? Because it seems to me like something that should have happened earlier - if it was going to happen at all. I hate hate HATE to criticise anything about my favourite story of all time, but this kind of plot device seems to have completely thrown the story off-track when it was so close to ending. I guess it feels like Jasper and Edward have been through enough already, without this extra little problem. But once more I will place my trust in the hands of the author, and assume whatever you have coming up next with be huge enough to eclipse this.
| Guest 5/7/13 . chapter 31
Can't you update this weekend? I mean, why waiting two weeks? ;-)
Thank you for writing this wonderful story.
| sibaruneko 5/8/13 . chapter 31
omg...finally got to sit down and read this chapter, and now i'm anxiously awaiting the next one! please don't take too long to update! i'm dying to know what's next!
| Emmyb1 5/8/13 . chapter 31
My heart breaks for these two boys. I can only hope for a HEA for both our boys.
You write with so much heart I'll miss theses boys when they're gone.
Good luck with the original work and I look forward to hearing more from the M&A boys.
| JustTheSlashMaam 5/7/13 . chapter 31
wow, shortest wait for a chapter ever! ugh, so sad, I was crying throughout this whole thing. I don't think Jasper should give up so easily, but I understand that he thinks he's doing what Edward wants. I know you'll find a way to fix this. Interested to know what Edward is going through, I'm sure these two days were horrible for him in a lot of ways. look forward to your next update as always, I hope its another short wait :)