Hell. You made me smile. Lol.

Only found this a few days ago and have been hooked by it. Great action and story with a nice amount of personal storyline. Had me guessing about Raffy's intentions all the way through and I can sympathise with the Hammersley crew, it's not good only knowing bits of a story when you're in the thick of it.

Well done, hope you write something else soon.

great chapter please update

Great Ending, especially liked the last line :)

What a terrific finish to very good story. I liked it from start to finish. It had it all - action, romance, intrigue and a bit of MK as well.

Looking forward to the continuation of series.

Bravo!

this was a great way to finish the story off and i like it alot, well done

lovely chapter, nice way to finish and i loved the last line lol xx zara

Well done! I loved the story from start to finish. I loved the subtle nuances and innuendo you included that echoed the actual SP episodes. The language was well utilised, descriptions effective and the action superb. I'm looking forward to any other stories you write.

yep i loved it,

very good story line!

nice chapter :)

Great Chapter, can't wait to see how this all wraps up :) Looking forward to more :D

very nice chapter cant wait to see how it pans out :)

xxzara

lovinggg itt!

is there gunna be more mike and kate?

Awesome chapter and i can't wait to read more, i like the way you write your stories and you should consider it as a profession as you are really good at it

very good :D