|Reviews for Foreign Land|
| angry penguin 7/2/11 . chapter 1
Hell. You made me smile. Lol.
| SeaKat01 5/31/11 . chapter 21
Only found this a few days ago and have been hooked by it. Great action and story with a nice amount of personal storyline. Had me guessing about Raffy's intentions all the way through and I can sympathise with the Hammersley crew, it's not good only knowing bits of a story when you're in the thick of it.
Well done, hope you write something else soon.
| hol2882 8/26/10 . chapter 21
great chapter please update
| quonoeye 8/26/10 . chapter 21
Great Ending, especially liked the last line :)
| pook 8/25/10 . chapter 21
What a terrific finish to very good story. I liked it from start to finish. It had it all - action, romance, intrigue and a bit of MK as well.
Looking forward to the continuation of series.
| Tayswiftfan242 8/25/10 . chapter 21
this was a great way to finish the story off and i like it alot, well done
| talyn64 8/25/10 . chapter 21
lovely chapter, nice way to finish and i loved the last line lol xx zara
| ktebid 8/25/10 . chapter 21
Well done! I loved the story from start to finish. I loved the subtle nuances and innuendo you included that echoed the actual SP episodes. The language was well utilised, descriptions effective and the action superb. I'm looking forward to any other stories you write.
| whispersomethingtome 8/25/10 . chapter 21
yep i loved it,
very good story line!
| talyn64 8/25/10 . chapter 20
nice chapter :)
| quonoeye 8/25/10 . chapter 20
Great Chapter, can't wait to see how this all wraps up :) Looking forward to more :D
| talyn64 8/24/10 . chapter 19
very nice chapter cant wait to see how it pans out :)
| whispersomethingtome 8/24/10 . chapter 20
is there gunna be more mike and kate?
| Tayswiftfan242 8/24/10 . chapter 20
Awesome chapter and i can't wait to read more, i like the way you write your stories and you should consider it as a profession as you are really good at it
| whispersomethingtome 8/24/10 . chapter 19
very good :D