I know it's been a while since you wrote this, but I found it whilst surfing the web. It's a great fic, and I just wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed reading it. I hope that some day you write some more seaquest fics, especially ones with Ortiz and Brody LOL! Thanks again.

Love,

Lynn

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Yes! FINALLY! A Miguel centered fic! I love him! He is so hot and totally does not get enough credit! There are about a bazillion Lucus and Bridger fics (Mostly Lucus ones) and it very refreshing to see one about one of my other favourite characters! Great story! Loved it! Could have been several chapters if you seperated it but to hell with format! Great job! Loved it!

OH MY GOD! This story was pvery good. I love Ortiz he is like so HOT!

I thought that the writing was excellent, the plot line creative, but it lacked development. Overall it was an excellent job, but there were too many plot developments that either weren't explained or completely ignored. What did the bad guys ultimately want? What were they doing on the island? Etc., etc. The author obviously has Miguel as a favorite character and wanted to place him as the hero - they just needed to think the plot through and develop it a little more. Overall though, excellent writing style.

why do i feel like dejavu? i think i read this somewhere.. but if i think too hard, im going to hurt myself.. :).. anyways excelent story! AWESOME! i loved it! BRAVO!

I liked the basic premise of the story - anything Miguel - and enjoyed the "psychic torture." A few plot/reality problems, but easily overlooked. Thanks for posting - hope you've got some more Miguel for us soon!

I liked the basic premise of the story - anything Miguel - and enjoyed the "psychic torture." A few plot/reality problems, but easily overlooked. Thanks for posting - hope you've got some more Miguel for us soon!

I think I've read this story somewhere before. I liked it then and I enjoyed it enough to read it again! Great work, looking forward to your other work :)