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| MindIIBody 2006-02-17 ch 4,  | abuseHi there, great work. Hmm...=_= when you typed 'Koaru' did you really mean, 'Kaoru?' Either or, great work. :D |
| Adelaide MacGregor 2006-01-11 ch 4, | abuseGah! Okay, that was absolutely adorable! You did an excellent job, especially with Aoshi and Misao. I loved the ending with the kids, so cute! Great job! |
| Adelaide MacGregor 2006-01-11 ch 2, | abuseGreat chapter, on to the next one! Sorry if I skip chapters, when I read a story already written and such, I often do that...get boring writing a review one after another for the same story. |
| Adelaide MacGregor 2006-01-11 ch 1, | abuseGood start, I liked it. It sounds like you have a good beginning. I was a little puzzeled when I read this line from your Author's note though...'mostly Aoshi's thoughts on Sano.' Hm...kinda scary, if it is what I'm thinking it is, but it doesn't sound like what I think it is. Sorry if that is confusing. |
| mandella-sama 2005-05-22 ch 4, | abuseYeah! Sad but loved the ending with the kids and marraige! |
| CookyButtButt 2004-01-19 ch 4, | abuseThe beginning of your story started out kind of slow. The way in which you had them get together was cute. But the epilogue I have to admit was CLASSIC! It was GREAT! Keep up the good work. |
| Seychella 2002-12-24 ch 4, | abuseAHHhhh thank yo so much for finishing this story!!! lol the ending was so cute! loved it. ^_~ |
| Nermal 2002-11-11 ch 4, | abuse"Your daughter and my son." Sanosuke again gestured toward the children and spoke as if Aoshi were a dimwitted child; he then closed his eyes and lay back down. "A union." I can't help laughing when I see that!! =) This is a very nicely done fic! I love your work and I encourage you to keep on writing. |
| Sigel Phoenix 2002-09-09 ch 4, anon. | abuseHey Desi! Glad to see you back and writing again. This chapter was great, like the others ... with quite the fitting ending. XD |
| yasu-yasu 2002-09-07 ch 4, | abuseHeh heh... This fic is too cool! I have to say again... |
| Chri 2002-09-05 ch 4, | abuseSano and Aoshi really do form a gread duo. I can really understand Aoshi. Mustn't kill, must kill, kill, kill, kill :) |
| Sai 2002-09-05 ch 4, anon. | abuseawe soo sweet and cute!!!!!! such a great stori and such a funni ending!! wonder who would Hitomi pick??? hee hee o well so gald tat da stori is finish have been waiting for quites sum time!!! o well great stori hope more would come out soon!!! ja for now ^o^ |
| erin 2002-09-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseSugoi celste san ¡¡ I´m happy that you have finished this fic Hope see ya soon writing more A/M stuff. |
| Lazuli Silverwing 2002-09-05 ch 4, | abuseI had actually almost lost all hope that this story would ever be finished! You have no idea of how much it means to me to have that hope revived- and fulfilled! Suffice it to say that I love this story, and that I will always think that it is one of the most beautiful ones I have ever read. |
2002-09-05 ch 4, anon. | abusePlease Please Please but more spacing it is really a sttrain on the eye and also.. it is Kaoru... BUT I LUV UR FIC |