Haha. Those homophobic jerks got what they deserved. Too bad what happened to Neville, reminds me of my own past. Keep writin'!

Cute Potter fic. Yeah, yeah, I'm too lazy to review both chapters. :p I like this character you made up. Dude, he's cool! Is he alive? Could I date him? Heh.

hey bro! i'm impressed...the 2nd chappie up so fast! neville is cute in this... two things...i think the middle thing is kinda confusing...where the dumb asses are getting punished. and it's too soon for aidan and neville to be in love. this is a great fic! i'm really, really proud of you, hun! keep it up!

This chapter was a bit rushed. The description was excellent, and the emotions very pure. However, it's too soon for them to fall in love. Maybe, you could have the boys keep the attraction but... Well, that's just my opinion. Dumbledore is by far my favorite character. Aidan is definintely my second! It's so sad about everything Neville and he had to suffer through. They do make an adorable couple. Keep writing!

I'm very impressed, young man. Considering your age, this is great quality work. Aside from some grammatical errors and run on sentences, it's perfect. I enjoyed that humorous little scene with Aidan, Goyle, and Crabb. I feel Malfroy is a bit out of character. Snape is a unique character. Ron's reaction to Aidan was quite hiliarous!

Ooh...this is really good! Hehe. I like your new portrayal of Snape, Malfoy and Neville. I like this fanfic...keep writing!

great writing skills... i also love the added nots of anti-homophobia education- you should either be awriter or a politician! j/k keep up the good work!

*goggles* dang lil bro! that's a great story! why was neville beaten up? grrr...it's good! i'm so proud of you! and thanks for putting me in your disclaimer type thingy! lol. i feel so special now. this is excellent...i'm going to keep reading this...faithfully! post the next chapter soon!