Hi there!

Well, yes, it is a bit short and the Imposter-Astronema dynamic isn't really fleshed out and neither are the other character angsts. But it's a cool premise and a fun story all the same. If you feel like redoing it, I say go for it: it's got lot of potential! (But I know how you feel about moving on and just letting be.)

Cheers!

nice story

Awesome job. I love it. Catch ya on the flip side.

What was that sceptere thing Karone spoke of? Who was that imposter?

I liked it alot. You did a great job.:)

mi's again...lol. Good story! (Even though I'm years behind)

Cool fic

Very cool story!:) Zhane is very heroic, (what a gentleman)he needs a pat on the back for that. He's so sweet to Karone and Ashley!

I wanted to ask you something else about your fic Sanguine but they clicky thing will only let you subit once so I'll do it now here:) Does Astromena have fangs, huh huh?:):) Samily and her would make the greatest of friends... hehe

Keep up the great work and may the writers-block-bug spare you!;)

I think this is gonna be one of my favorite PRiS fics... okay, I agree on the part about the impostor's back story, but all in all it's a good fic :-D