That was really good! I can't wait for the next chapter! Oh, yes this a KyoxTohru or Yukiru story? Or do you not know? But it is fine if you don't! I always say that even if you ont know, keep going!

This is a great story. Many OC stories aren't written very well, but this is an exception. It's really very interesting. Please keep writing!

-shadow

This is really good. Can't wait for more