A lovely read. You handle the characters well : )

I LOVE this underappreciated ship and I'm so glad you wrote this. I think they do have chemistry and I like how you introduced the potential attraction/feelings, both the good and the bad aspects of it, in this short story. I would keep reading if you keep writing this.

Ooooh! I love Carson/Liz! Such an underappreciated ship! Thanks for sharing the story!

I enjoyed this a lot - I usually like Carson with Teyla (mostly owing to the rather sweet chemistry Paul McGillion had with Rachel Luttrell), but I think this would have been an interesting pairing as well. I'd certainly read any sequels!