They're both idiots ... wonderful and glorious.

Filled with conviction they are, but idiots they remain. Till of course they're together lol

love it!

ohh i love my fav characters indulging in a little self loving every once and a while. (especially when they're almost desperate like this ;P) i love this story! the way u portrayed their characters was well played as well!

Awwww it's kind of sad, but I still love it! 3

I loved the contrasts between them. The way that you showed Naruto's clumsy, chaotic, innocent personality and Sasuke's controlled, efficient, detached way of doing things. But in the end neither of them could control themselves once their bodies took over.

Woah that was hot, I adore the loss of control and how they both locked it in their minds afterwards. It all felt very real and some of the comparrissons and Sasuke's detached manner and way of thinking were brilliant.

Hey,

I don't know what to say exept that I loved it! I know it's not much but... you know, I can't think of anything else. All the fellings... I mean, everything was... I don't know actually but! thank you so much for sharing this amazing little story with us.

I loved the last sentence... well question... it was just... perfect?

WELL! Anymay,

Great job to you both, I guess.

I hope to read more of you sometime,

Chouchou-chan!

I really liked ho w you treated the characters, their feelings, hopes, and fears. You really showed that it's not all black and white for both of them, even though it would make their life so much more simple.

You really are both amazing writers.

Ooh, I loved this. ) Great work!

WELCOME BACK DEAR! I have been missing you SO DAMN MUCH! Thanks again for the permission to do and post the translation of your stories - they are here on this very web site under my profile. I am so proud that i have them!

As to this story - you never fail to make me happy with your stories! This one is a bit sad though, but still as awesome as all the rest! I totally admire how you manage to render the feeling of the characters through descriptions...

Hugs and kisses!

Make Sasuke come baaaack! Please, this was great, but I'm already depressed enough by the real story; isn't a fanfiction writer's job to make things better?

Anyways, great fic, and glad to see you're back! I liked the Sasuke part best; I think it's a very good interpretation of what his state of mind could be at that time... Keep it up!

Oh, and by the way, I keep reading and re-reading the DMZ...When are we going to get another fic with the Devil incarnate older brother?

:)) This was soooo good! I love the affect that this story has, the mirroring of the actions of our two favorite boys, from their worlds and their points of view. It was interesting to see the characterization of Naruto and Sasuke, how their hearts and minds seemed connected just out of their control, like their natural urges. Naruto and Sasuke both seem to have similar reasons for their insane training, but they just don't want to except that they are somehow drawn to one another, despite their effort to control the situation. 33 This story was quiet and sad, and a little but wistful. Michelerene and Rasengan22, you guys are both amazing authors, and it was a pleasant surprise to see a collab posted! I felt that you two combined your own personal writing styles perfectly, and the flow of this piece was really poetic and helped to create that quiet and introspective mood. I hope this isn't the last collab between the two of you!

xo,

Shoes

You're right. Not enough self-love ficcies. Not alot of plotline either (_) but fairly good for what it is.

oh poor sasuke

Naruto and Sasuke seem to be on the same wavelength...very good.

Very yummy. -