next chapter please can not wait.

dude u havent updated in like 6 years! wat did u forget about us!

come on dude make another chapter!

After all these years (YES years)... I am still waiting for a new chapter. But don't feel bad, I know how you feel to lose interest in something. But I have a proposition for you. What if someone else finished it for you, giving you credit of course. No, it wouldn't be me but another writer here on fanfic. Thats what I did when I wrote my story. I want you to think about it and let me know. YOu can find my email on my profile.

Mail me when you finish OK I can't wait to see what happens next.

Continue.

I want to see If I have the symptoms of crazy people.

I'm starting to think so._

Keep up the story.

chris

Its great. I found the perfect story to relate to.

Its a different story telling style, but its one of many.

I'll read up to your last chapter then give another comment.

Cheers

Hey, my name is Chris and I read alot. I'm 18.

Don't get down cause people don't review ur work.

I say press-on. It's how stories develope.

Its more interesting when not even you know the ending.

WHo knows the outcome.

Personally, I'm relating to the story very well.

I'm happy you have a few more chapters for me to read.

Continue.

I don't believe I've ever seen a story that had the legendaries portrayed as the bad guys. That alone gets you props for a good story. Ash is well-characterized, going mad and whatnot. I just wonder how much is real and how much is just his imagination playing horribly cruel tricks on him. I hope somehow or another, everything works out in the end. However it works out. *evil grin* Randomly, I remember reading the first chapter to this but I must've missed all the other ones. It's a shame. Anyways, I send you writing encouragement! *scrunches face in concentration* Bzt! Er...Well, it's worth a try.

I'm really amased, this is the best fafiction storie I have ever read. If you can, in the next chapter you can have ash being more meen to everyone and pushing them away when they try to help.

I like this story and i'm hoping you will be updating soon.

Okay this is an awesome story, but I'm starting to get a little pissed!

I've been reading on this site for three years and you haven't updated for the entire length of that!

I've only become a member in early March, but this is ridiculous!

Hurry the hell up already! This is one of the most interesting stories I've ever read and there's nothing happening in it anymore!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

HI, I have to tell you something. I have been waiting a complete year and this story still hasn't gone beyond the 5th chapter. How much longer can I wait.

This story is so unique and has such great details that it seems that I can actually be in Ash's skin and feel these emotions. This is a complete opposite on what goes on the show, but it makes sense.

I also appreciate that fact that this story is not about "Ash I'm your father, I'll kidnap you" type. Though some of them are interesting, I do believe that Ash's father is not him. But in your story, my opinion differs. That is waht happen when you do have skills of a writer.

I am wondering if you are friends with the teminatress. I have also been waiting for her stories to finish. If you are let her know that I'm waiting. Please, write another chapter so I know your there. A little encouragement may help. Let me know if you need any ideas.

-P.R. Dragonite

Hello! Is anybody there! This is a frickin' awesome story and plot and I want an update now! I wanna read more!

Good chapter, great story, how could you not update it for almost a year? T_T Such good/twisted stories never be left hanging. When you have more time, I really hope you'll continue this fic because it really rocks.