Awesome story! I loved it! You did a great job!(:

A sequel is needed because the following questions need answers.
1. How are the wolfs going to react?
2. Meeting the Denalis. How's Tanya going to react?
3. Can Bella project her shield?
4. Is Aro going to want Bella?
5. Is Chalie going to find out?
6. Who was the vampire that was at the studio and why?
7. And Ashanti, what will be her fate?

And many more. Please consider writing a sequel.

I just finished reading the first paragraph and I can say for sure that it caught my attention and it's a fact that at least the next five chapters are going to be read. I like the way you began-this is one of the major factors that lead to somebody reading what you wrote and also you have a good way of expressing yourself(it's obvious you write a lot).

ps: i read a comment that had a spoiler and i so regret

Great changes to the shopping and bad guy run-in. I really like both Edward's and Bella's thoughts.

I really like the way you have Bella and Edward interacting. Their romance seems more believable than in cannon, which seemed like more of an infatuation, at this point at least.

Wow, that was a really long chapter. Thanks for sharing Edward's POV. It was very good. Can't wait to see how the rest of them figure out she's "different."

Oh, poor Bella, killing another person.

Now I'm wondering if Bella will run away, too. But Charlie won't be understanding so that would make it difficult.

"Well, that was interesting," was pretty much what I thought about your first chapter.

So good!

I loved this story so much! It was full of action and romance, and it was honestly just perfect. I've seen many people make Bella an angel or a witch, but never a succubus, and so I found this story very interesting. I know this story has been completed for a while, but I hope that you still plan on writing a sequel. I can't wait to see what else you have in store!

loved it!

Is she going 2 kill Alice cause she has a lot of energy

hahaha dude, sorry for some reason my computer wasnt showing there were more chapters! Cant wait to read them! :D

Totally adore this story! Hope you update again soon, I can't wait to hear how Edward takes this (and the rest of the family) !