wow! i stopped reading jily fanfic but yours is so good that it has inspired me to keep reading:) Please update asap!
ps: u are a very talented writer

i absolutely love it, but are you going to continue it? please do!

OMG! I love L.J. fanfic's and this has got to be one of my favourites. I can tell that this is gonna be good, I know a good fanfic when I see one. Pleeeaaaasssseee write on,

I solemnly swear that you SHHOULD WRITE ON!

I'm a weirdo

aw poor Lilly. haha please write more this is really good!

this is going to be a good story. i can tell. if i need to prove it, i'll consult Trelawney or my magic 8 ball (8 ball is more accurate, even though i don't actually have one...Damn!) the next chapter is going to be James thinking over the summer right? how, meaybe if he stopped showing off around her and being every reason she won't go out with him, she'd finally say yes! then they get back,(3rd chap most like) and she's a bitch to him cuz she's not paying attention to the subtle changes, yet he remains calm and cool to her every time she says a mean remark. she finally gets off her high horse in the fourth chapter after a fight with James, where he actually fought back, and they become friends. somewheere along those lines Lily's best friend comes in and teams with Sirius to get them together by the end of the year whilst falling in love with each other. *breath* update soon!

I feel like this story is ?cleaner? than the last. I think that it will be a lot better and more interesting! Please continue! I want to know what's coming next!