I can't believe it ended so abruptly! O.o Just, wow. I should have seen that coming, but I DIDN'T.
I really enjoyed the story and stayed up for hours reading it. It's got so much passion and such. At times, I feel like she's a bit desperate for him because of all the little clingy things she has going on, but I didn't mind that so whatever. :) Very cute story! Now that I think about it, I adore the ending. You couldn't have done it better.
Cheers!

LOVE how you've written the ending. I can see it, in my mind. Not overly fluffy and sickly-sweet, and yet not horribly depressing. To me, this fic had the same integrity and respect for its characters as a published novel ;)

Wooah.. You are brilliant!

Normally I online review at the end of a story, but I'm in chapter 4 and I just can't help it... I love it! And I think you did a really good job on the dream, because if she woud have found nothing the chapter would be a little boring maybe.. but if she found more it would be unrealistic.. I really adore your story until so far.. great writing style, funny, and in character... can't wait to read what happens next!

this was beyond excellent! you've kept me up for several nights with this story... great job. your writing has been an inspiration to me to continue to improve my own writing. cheers, duckie! 33

greaaat. good job

This is so incredibly awesome. I really like it!

*pletely apreciate the fact that you kept it so realistic and not OOC, because that irritates me more than anything. And i appreciate the non-perfect happily ever after too. It flowed well and shfifjeiddkdojdi it was perfect.
I can't wait to read your other writing, you write so gorgeously.

Goshdarn after reading this fic, every other inception fic will be disappointing. I just wanted to commend you on this beautifully written, realistic, heartwrenching story. And god, the ending, it really tugs at my heartstrings. And i com

Your story is so amazing! Thank you, I absolutely love it!

Wonderful! What a beautiful story...I read it with bated breath, waiting for the next chapter and the next and the next. Lovely! Very nicely done :)

Such a beautiful ending. Sad, yet so sinple. I was hoping you would write more beyond this, but oh well, life's never fair. Amzing and brilliant story, by the way.

My first Inception fanfic.
Really love the way you ended this. Feels very true to the original, with a very open but satisfying ending. Wrapped it up nicely!

The ending was a beautiful, heartbreaking flourish to this exquisite story. I read, I cried, I loved x

I am speechless...This is the BEST Inception fanfiction I had read.