keep going with this story it doesnt matter how long it is as long as all the chapters or plot is intresting (btw i love ur story epic plot)

are u kidding this story is amazing people will keep intrest trust me

-ur biggest fan gizelle

I want to keep reading! :( Please don't stop now!

PAIN! DX OMG I LUFFS CU! Q_Q and I'll read it... I pwomise :3... specially since you had lil Pain raped :3

Damn...I feel bad for Tobi and Pein :(

And what about Itachi! They must be saving something bad for him...

Wow such harsh treatment they get, poor boys! Rape is horrible! But this story is too good to stop reading now! Keep up the good work!

Aww poor pain :(. Hope he doesn't turn gay. Oh maybe Itachi should have his turn at it since its not fair the other two did. haha

YES! PAIN RAPE! OMG I LOVE YOU SO MUCH! TT

not weird at all! :D AND YES! FINALLY PAIN FOR PAIN XD I LOVE EEET! :3

Nooooo! I hope Pain doesn't get raped :(. But Tobi should! If someone has to make it tobi.! haha.

oh Leader-sama, this is bad if they can beat Leader! Oh poor Itachi, Zetsu, Pain, and Tobi I hope they come out of this alive!

Oh this is getting so good, I can't wait for the next chapter!

Itachi, Tobi and PEIN got captured! And what is gonna happen to them! D: -panics-

How will the Akatsuki function! What about Zetsu! How will he live without Itachi, Tobi, and Pein! D:

wow, poor Tobi, Pain stop being a Pain(lol), I wonder what will happen to our poor boys, Oh lord they have Itachi! I hope he does not do something stupid. This story just gets better and better! Can't wait for more.

Tobi is such a brat. He seriously needs to grow up...and i think he got what he deserved. But anyways, good story! I hope Zetsu gets his voice back somehow, and i'm looking forward to the next chapter.

AHHHH! PEIN YOU JERK! D: Poor Tobi is so abused!

They have Itachi! And the Akatsuki is being attacked! NO! D: What will happen now! Tobi and Zetsu might not survive! You can kill Zetsu, just not Tobi! TT_TT