Very well written - I loved it!

it's really good!

Interesting approach, staying with the plot from the movie. I really liked this, and I thought that it was pretty well written, and convincing :)

That was absolutely fantastic. I think you really delved into her thoughts and really embodied her personality. You also gave her a believable background and a perfect explanation. I would love if you wrote other one-shots of this movie. You are a wonderful author.

That was absolutely amazing! You truly captured the Angst and tragedy behind the character. So sad, yet so good.