Short but cute!

the story is good. i would love to see what you come up with next to make it extremely awesome.

I thought this story was really cute. I like how you opened the story, with Jane panicking about Kevin walking out on her and then her trying to cover it up when he shows up. I don't know I just thought that was funny.

The story was well written, but I think there should be more detail between the dialogue, if you know what I mean. Just a few extra sentences describing and explaining the scenes and situations to help expand your writing. I hope I offered you some useful advice, if not you can just ignore me XD

Argh, sorry for writing such a long review...

Long story short: Awesome fic! 3

I didn't feel like signing in! I LOVE your new story! Preeeeeeeeetty!