are you eveing working on your next chapter

the actual redstone vision was

redstone waren is cold and dead
it only exists inside your head

Love this story.

Nice chapter, I like how you made Hazel and Sam like close from pretty much the beginning, hope to see more.

Ah...what a clever rabbit custom! Do any of the other rabbits share this bond? I was wondering what that word meant, thanks for uploading :) I love how the rabbits have strong faith and beliefs about the sacred bond.

Hey Todd,

another bonus chapter is up! Interesting how you wrote an entire chapter focusing on Hazel calling Sunflower heart-brother after the final battle. The ceremony in particular was the most interesting and well-detailed. Although it was kind of hard to imagine Bigwig initiating such a ceremony; his department is really the Owsla on the battlefield. Frankly, i would have expected Primrose or Blackberry, or even Campion to handle this. Then again, this is your story...

Actually, would you mind if i borrowed that ceremony at some point to use in my own fanfics? I promise you, i'll reference it approprietly. Looking forward to more!

Keep up the good work!
All the best,
Alex

P.S. The next chapter for Beyond is being written and should be up sometime next week. Also, NW1 (and Tales) is undergoing another proof-reading, to add a little more to it if you're interested...

how about this for a story: Glade tries to tell Sunflower, she's pregnant

You didn't give much information what Sam/Sunflower look like, like what his hair colour of his hair, his fur

Hey Todd!

The bonus chapters are up! Interesting cut scene showing Sam's (or rather Sunflower's) problems in adjusting to his new life. Although he has had over a year of living with Hazel's band to learn how to survive, settling down permamently as a rabbit is another story.

Glade's fury with him for swallowing his tongue when she told him she loved him, although understandable, does seem a bit extreme (then again, i am pretty rubbish at understanding girls...). Glad it didn't ruin their relationship though!

Real touching how Hazel came and gave Sam advice, as well as challenging his thoughts on his true feelings towards Glade, to make Sam see reason. It really shows how close Sam has become with his new friends and that he made the right decision in giving up the human world. Not that he can go back anymore...

How about writing another chapter showing Sam teaching his kittens human things? I don't know, but i am sure that a reincarnated human-turned-rabbit would at least try and pass on some of his old human knowledge to those around him. Even Sam's high-school education should suffice to give simple lessons in things like reading, basic arithmetic, geography, astronomy... Maybe he could use street signs to teach his children how to read and count beyond four. Frankly, i was surprised in the epilogue than none of their kittens had picked up human words and terms...

Looking forward to the next chapter!

All the best,
Alex

Aw this is too sweet! :D I'm glad they got together at last. Watch out Sunflower! Does stick together!

*sniffsniff* well, I dont know bout the rest of you, but I frithing loved this chapter. This brightened my day thanks manngreat job

This story was F****** EPIC!

You have good idea's in your story and it's quite easy to read. I like Sam and his choice of the name Sunflower was perfect. I can't help but notice though, that his hero's were from the book, and the characters he's meeting are all from the TV series. Blackberry is female, Hannah has a name where as in the book she was a he and a name was never mentioined. Buckthorn, Speedwell and Acorn are missing. Strawberry should already be with them since they met him on the way to the down in the book.

Anyway, good story, but I think maybe Sam's been watching more television than he's been reading.

Well Id like you to know that this was probably one the greatest fics ive read. I loved this story so much and im so frithing elated to know youre writing postscript chapters. You are a FRITHtastic writer so thank you so much for giving us all this story! I wont say I know how hard it is to write a story like this because im still barely gathering ideas for mine and even thats tough so congrats man. This was awesome.

Aww, they ended together! :)