Finally they kissed and Misty is okay.

Butch and Cassidy, ugh those two always somehow get on my nerves more than Jessie and James and they barely appear in the show.

Oh no this definetly doesn't look at all good.

Yeah, they are obvious. As obvious as the sun shinning down. They're both idiots.

That was a little odd... but enjoyable. The time lapses were a little hard to follow, but still a nice job. :)

very cute

I loved this line:

Misty has been in love with Mr Pokèmon Master wannabe/best friend from a very young age.

It is SO Obvious!

love it? ME TOO! everyone must love it... as always is say AAML rules _

love it? ME TOO! everyone must love it... as always is say AAML rules _

love it!

Lovely AAMRN, as always. Love might be complicated but it's always grand.

Hey, your story was awesome! Um...PERFECT! There was nothing in particular that can be improved..it was great! I was on the verge of tears when Ash was at Misty's bedside...It was very touching..One of the best I've ever seen you write. I have read a lot of your AAML stories because I am all for them! Okay, continue with writing great AAML fan fictions!

What? No sequal?

This is a great story!

Charlotte: I think it was very good! It gave an interesting concept and I'm dying to find out what happens now! My rating: 8/10 - sorry, I'm a hard marker!

Eliza: I totally agree! It is excellent! My rating 8/10

This was a great story. You are very good. Please continue with your writing. You are the bomb! :) Ash and Misty forever.