I am going to be favoriting so many of your stories today. One little mention of XS from a friend who got addicted (TwinKats on here) and I watched one episode.

Than Chase appeared...I think you can figure out what happened from there...

this was awesome.

You know, there was a time when I didn't like Chack...then I started reading your fics.

You should be ashamed of yourself, corrupting my mind like that. :P

Anyways, this fic did not disappoint. I love fics that give a sympathetic angle for villains, because nobody's evil for no reason. I always feel sorry for the bad guys. *shrugs*

Anywho, great job. :)

Awesome!

All the characters are in character. I think this is my fave out of all your stories. Jack has been my favourite Xiaolin Showdown character ever since I read a Fairly OddParents' crossover pairing him with Norm the Genie, when I hadn't even seen XS (now, of course, I have seen it). He's got a lot of what I like in characters, quite a bit that I identify with in some ways and quite the complex personality.

I really like how this shows how the aspects of Jack's personality fit into his desire to conquer the world, and how, at the end, Chase's questions prompted him to make a plan that fit his strengths. 'Cause yeah, that evil boy genius could do just about anything if he played to his strengths. So yeah...

Also, I particularly liked the start, in which Jack says that he can't explain taking over the world because everyone understands it. 'Cause hey, the obvious often is the hardest to explain.

Chase's attitude towards Jack, understanding, loving and really wanting to help, is wonderful. It's what anyone would want in a lover. Amazing that two evil guys could love each other that much, huh, but hey, that shows the complexity of the universe and the human brain. I like that. And throughout it, I'm always able to remember that they are Evil. (Then again, with them tossing around the word so much, do you think anyone would forget? XD)

So yeah... Here's my long, non-requesting review for Domination, which I am pretty sure is my fave out of all your stories.

P.S - I read the mini-novel at the end (a few times, actually.)

Writing about Chases reasons would be a bit redundant. But figuring out Jacks was a stroke of pure genius. Maybe you should have your numbers tested. It seems so plausible. Someone could do that, or be doing that right now, and we wouldn't stand a chance.

That was awesome! I love how you planned out the whole taking over the world plan. very cool. :)

omg,JACK SPICER FOR PERSEDENT!8D!

This was pretty damn awesome. gotta admit how adorable and uke-ish Jack turned out in his story..he sounded like he needed a hug XD

Those two are definitively very dangerous together... but they are so pretty!

Nice fic, I always wondered what Jack's reasoning was for taking over the world. It seems so 'mainstream' in children's cartoons-I always wonder what someone would DO with a world, much less why they would want it in the first place. :3

There was a section that I felt was out of place- the part where Chase looks at Jack and describes his physical and mental attributes, and what they mean to him. It seemed a tad abrupt and out of place, partially because there was so little detail before then, and you just launched into it without much of a transition of WHY Chase was observing him at the moment... It wasn't too out of place, but it struck me as odd, and I just thought I'd mention it.

I like the plan for Jack's world domination. It reminds me of "So The Drama" from Kim Possible, only with actual appliances instead of kids meals. XD

side note: woah, Jack has a high I.Q.! O.o...

Anyway, I enjoyed reading this. You portrayed both Chase and Jack so well, it was also an entertaining read. I hope I get to read more by you in the future, you're a good fanfic writer. :)

Avearia

...Evil shouldn't feel this warm and cuddly, dammit. They're the bad guys, but you make me root for them. Honestly!