Nice! Short, sweet... interesting!

Lovely!

very nice sweet story. When watching the show you really see that in his eyes. you reflect that in your story. bravo.

I really liked this! Keep writing! : )

This is such a nice and sweet story . Almost dream like . I like it . More would be nice.

beautiful

thank you so much :)

Very nice! I could see a little scene run through my head as I read that, and I think it would match the show nicely.

Jared Evans

Ares Burn