Not bad, look forward to the others

I love you, I love you, I love you... Your stories always make me so happy Lauryn!

sav and declan. never thought about them, but you made it work. now, peter and sav, yes, them I could believe. Nice story!

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Try something like cock. or dick. or hell, even penis. enough goddamn members.

Absolutely fantastic!

I like how there was a certain innocence about it...how a lot of it was pushed by need and they were just acting off of their feelings in the moment.

I never imagined this pairing before but you definitely got me interested!

LOL at Alli coming in at the end XD

Awesome job!

well yum yum cum in their tum, that was some smutty slashey goodness]

i'm-a thinkin' sexxxxy sequal lolz

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HOT! I like it very much. Keep up the work!

At first I was like 'declan and sav...?' but I'm so glad I gave this fic a try. This was really good and I LOL'd at Alli at the end haha