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Faylinn Night 5/29/12 . chapter 1
Real life is a great place to draw inspiration from, so it's all good. So amusing, I loved it. Great job!
Chikara-san 11/4/11 . chapter 1
Very sweet. I love a good Vegeta and Bra bonding fic. And I love how he tried to argue with logic... to a four-year-old.
Bullet2tm 8/6/11 . chapter 1
Cute!
Overlander43 7/10/11 . chapter 1
I would've loved to be Goku watching this :3 3
Cara2012 2/15/11 . chapter 1
very funny and adorable and yellow does match pink Bulma made Vegeta wear a pink shirt and yellow pants they looked horrible but they do kinda match i'm surprised you didn't through that in there lol )
bvprincess23 1/30/11 . chapter 1
hilarious! I just love Bra and Vegeta!
Fenni 11/7/10 . chapter 1
This has to be the most pleasurable Vegeta/Bra story I have ever read. Bra is such a cutie and so much like Vegeta in this story. And I can see al of it going down just as you wrote it. It's so good! I'm totally in love with it. *w*
VegeXKaka 10/13/10 . chapter 1
Awwww that's cutee! (:

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Lolchen 8/31/10 . chapter 1
Whoo! I love it! I laughed so much reading this, it kinda made my day :D I sure love your little Bra there... and Vegeta totally loosing to his little girl XD Nice one-shot! *faves*

Lolchen
WhiteChocolate123 8/12/10 . chapter 1
so cute! XD
Silvain Star 8/10/10 . chapter 1
You know, normally I avoid 'based on something that happened to the author' stories, but this is really good. Also, it's adorable and funny, and pretty much in character, too.
Jazzy Uchiha 8/8/10 . chapter 1
SO CUTE
TeamNorthman 8/4/10 . chapter 1
Adorable! I absolutely love bra/vegeta fics and this one was very cute :D
hopelesslydemented 8/3/10 . chapter 1
Awwww, that was cute! Bra sure has the makings of a spoiled brat - poor Vegeta, lol.
Alison 8/3/10 . chapter 1
lol
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