thhis is tha CUTEST story ever ! from beginning to end it was extremely captivating ! keep up tha absolutely great work yooou do . :D

I love this story and can't wait to read it!

Well done, your story was really well written! D

I'm glad you fixed up some of your errors, there are some grammer mistakes, but they are very minor and it doesn't affect the comprehension of the story. Your spelling was fine.

Overall, I enjoyed reading your story, it was creative and very discriptive! D

So far, your story is pretty good.

The grammer and spelling is okay. There are some errors that I want to point out to you though. Sakura's home town is spelled T-o-m-o-e-d-a, not T-o-m-o-e-o-d-o.

Also, I just wanted to let you know that a "Stallion" is a male horse and a "mare" is a female horse. Sorry, but there is no such thing as a "female stallion".

Overall, I like your story plot and your writing, keep up the nice work. D

Not that I don't like this story or anything, please don't use Japanese words in speeches. You put the some words in the wrong places and it turns out really weird, even the correct ones sound weird too.

And on with the plot! I like you imaginations and especially how descriptive this is. The most important thing is that, this is LONG! I love the OCs you created too, the three gods and goddess xD You know who I'm referring to. In addition, I love how you end the story, with Tomoyo's video and it's name, I think it's perfect too!

aw this was such a good story i rlly liked it XD

I'M SO HAPPY 4 THEM! this story was the best!

NANI!

aw! they got together! ur turn sakura, syaoran!

you have a talent you know that!

it is so touching! thanks for writing it! ; }

your good at writing stories!

*For the Whole Story (Gomen nasai, too lazy to go back and review all over again)*

This is a fascinating fanfiction, *proud speech about it goes here* I loved how to brings me to the edge of crying, of pains blah blah blah. Heh, I thought Syaoran and Sakura would at least attack Rage, Crystallight and Gem with things to annoy them about the four-lettered word. Kawaii fanfiction, would there be a sequel focusing on their love affairs, *wide eyed* a cliche moment where they have to show their powers to people they can trust just to save a certain continent or country? I love the moment where the cards and book are all about Sakura and Syaoran xP

i love ur story it is great keep on writing!

Oh

your fic was...

let me think...

GREAT FANTASTIC!

I didn't like very much the part when u kill Kero

But i just love it

it took me 2 days to read it all

but its great

u are very good!