Great lyrical choice for this fic :o)

Hi !

That was a great short story !

I love how you understand Gil, it's exactly who he is...love the talk with Sara and Warrick !

Good job for a good friendship pairing !

Bye

Megara1

Oh this was fantastic! i'm glad to see a view of how Sara may have changed her mind. It's too bad we never got the chance to see that on the show. You did a great job! And don't worry about your diction. You're doing great!

I liked it. Great story. I was disapointed that the show never showed Sara changing her mind.

Wonderful story! You captured the characters very well. I hope you will write more, because you're a great writer. Thanks for writing this story!

*** Karin ***

I really enjoyed your story! I hope that you write more soon!

That was awesome. Characterizations, perfect. I could HEAR them talking in my head. I look forward to more work from you.

Hey! that can't be the end already! please continue!

This is a great story. You did an amazing job with the characters. Thank you for sharing it on the site.

that's beutiful. Wonderfully written for someone who doesn't have english as a first language. Tell ya something, english is my first, and it's still the hardest class for me and spanish is the easiest

That was brilliant! Please write more!

This was GREAT! What terrific insight into the characters. Simply wonderful. One of my favorite CSI fics to date. Great work and please write more!