You switched from first person to third at the end (I did that too, just real Last Five Minutes! XD) but it was still really good. (Btw, in to and any way is usually 'into' and 'anyway'.) I like this story! This is the first FF story I've seen where Borchet mon comes in. XD. Please update soon!

This story is awsome! I know I reviewed late, BUT DONT JUGE! LOL! LOVE THE STORY! :D

RACHELLL! :O I cant wait for chapter 5! WRITE WRITE WRITE! :D

RACHEL! I'm Lovin the storyyy! :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D

AHHHH! :D I'm sitting beside youuu! :D And i'm like totally loving this storyy! :D

i loooove this! :)

OMG! So epicness! Update as soon as possible!

And no, it's not weird to want to kill a fictional character to steal her boyfriend. i want to do it to.

-A$h

kwl, just im not sure the voice would swear and TB won't really be afraid of max. STILL I LOVE IT! D keep writing. me wanna kick sam and lissa's asses! hehe

guess fang deseved it a bit for not telling max sooner. DAMN LISSA AND SAM, DA ASSHOLES!

ye, i like it. keep it coming. Iwant to see sam and lissa's arses KICKED! . ha.

Good story i love how at the end of this fang basically explodes at iggy. Its kind of funny since Fang like never talks but this is a good story you are a talented writer, keep writing.

AHHHH! You. Must. Write. MORE! So good!

-A$h

P.S: I depict Iggy as the older brother figure too in my stories. So you're not alone in that mindset.

Awesome story update soon

I liked it

OMG! This is getting good!

Really good. Please hurry to update. )))))))))