 youknowwho 8/15/10 . chapter 1 another wow!
you never just come out and say what is happening, do you? it might make it a bit easier to understand if you made events clearer, even just by saying what time period it is (i'm still not sure exactly when this is, because it cant be too long after hogwarts: he still had his quidditch tan; but reg's pessimism clearly shows that they are death eaters...)
but i love it... especially the ending!
ps. i'm adding you for fav authors!
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 L'ange Gabriel 8/9/10 . chapter 1Very interesting story. I'm still not sure about the depth of Regulus and Peter's relationship, but I thought it was very sweet. Regulus knew, then, that he was a traitor to his brother? I very much liked the ending, especially the last sentence 'Possibly it's pride.' It feels like those words describe Regulus' life very well.
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