I'm so glad that Tony found a loving home. Is there more to this story? If so, I hope that you'll update it soon.

Aww

Love stories where Tony run away and Gibbs take him in.

Poor little Tony getting beat so bad he ran away.

Glad he found the Gibbs and they took him in.

And he was able to learn that parents are supposed to love and care about there children.

one really fun error that you might want to fix, oh the damage one wrong letter can do.

(The two children knew sign language because both their parents were ""dead"".) found in the telling of where the children live.

I tried reviewing earlier but the ethernet cable came out so it didn't post. I guess that's a good thing, but it might also explain why I couldn't get chapter 2 to come up...or you had just posted it and it wasn't really available yet. i'm glad I got to read both. It's a real nice one. Are you going to go any further with this? I'd like to know what happens now that Tony is a Gibbs. 5/5

love the story.