It made me laugh, it made me scream, it made me love them more!(if that is even possible)

It was really tender how Hal wanted convince himself that he didn't 'care' about Kai..."I'm not taking care of him. I'm not. I'm NOT" LOL

And Kai...really, HOW can he endure Hal's mood? It's almost a miracle.

Poor Hal! It's obvious he wanted to kiss Kai (anotherway he could just hit him for the 'freedom') and it's obvious too that Hal had the hope that he will remember. Soo sweet!

I really love it! You should change the category to Romance too because it is very cute.

To favorites!

Kisses

PS-sorry for my bad english.I'm Argentinian and I speak spanish.

Aw... *sigh* sucks for you, Hal. What I loved about this story is that you portrayed Hal as... Hal :) with the touch of underlying sweetness he has when dealing with Kai. Although I don't think coffee and heavy foods would really help Kai sleep, maybe some warm chocolate ;)

I loved it! Hope you write more like it!

you should todaly make more! ,. DERP! i LOVE THIS!

SOOOOO AWSOMEEEEEE YOU MUST DO MORE

Omg! So good! Read this long ago but forgot to review, sorry ;D

Anyway awesome piece...

Loved every minute of it :) continue writing

Heheh, that's funny. Simple idea, the story is good.

Ready to wait for you new story.

I love this so much. Thank you for writing it! A sequel where Kai realizes what he's done, or he does it again, and wakes up would be nice. Just an idea though!

Cute. :)

Nice job keeping them in character.

Oh God! I'm so annoying to him I annoyed him out of his own home! I'm a horrible person!- I laughed here. Out loud. I'm a terrible person, aren't I.

Could you do a second chapter? Please? Pretty please? It'll make my torturous week of exams all the more bearable? :3

Jk. ..I'd love you forever if you did, though.

Again, this was really good.

J.

this was really cute thanks for writin this

I was planing on using this scene for something I was writing. You... good-for-nothing... TELEPATHIC IDEA-STEALER!

But *cough* I did enjoy what you came up with. Good job. n_n;

aww thats cute. it was funny nd i bet i would hav the same reaction to alcohol xD