I love this. I like how the vampire's identity wasn't revealed until the end. I LOVE how, in true Jessica form, she talks so much about the Cullens, and how she practically obsesses over Demetri.

It's kinda crazy that her two roommates from Minnesota (or the other state) are away on SB in Florida. This past SB, I met two girls from Minnesota who were on SB. Did I mention I live in Florida? LOL

I love all of your stories. You seem to really be able to grasp each character's likeness. I also love that everything is in 3rd person. It makes for much better writing, I think.

Ay ay ay! There's something about Demetri, isn't there? The accent, the mystery, the danger! Great work I find myself wondering if he's after more than a feed? He appears to have been fortuitously in her path a number of times now... it's a conundrum!

And Jessica; the much-maligned high school bitch - waiting tables! I'm torn; we're not supposed to like her, but I think I like her in this, any hint of angst and sign me up :)

Interesting and ominous. I hope you will continue this. Poor Jessica.