it's a very good fic we have the opportunity to guess what ada was thinking when whe fall from the bridge in re2: i apriciat it

nyan me likes! hehe. I especially like your author notes. This is a good fic. not too strong, not too weak. and... that's all I have to say XD

Aw, bummer, you're an Claire/Leon fan. I'm a Ada/Leon fan, so...

Anyway, I think you did a great job with this fanfic. There should be more Ada fanfics ou there. She deserves them!

Thank you for indulging the Ada fans (like me) by putting your expertise into an Ada fic. L/C is a cool match; but i've always loved Ada- thanks for giving her a voice, your fic is awesomely written and so how Ada is (to me); that it's almost scary!

I enjoyed the way that the opening and the closing mirror each other. Ada's final thoughts in this story are true. I also like her realization of why she likes Leon. Very nice.

::shivers:: i know i sent you a review already, but i reread it here and it chills me. i pull my flannels closer round me; i wish i had warm arms 'round me. isn't it strange that later the same day my reaction would be so far changed? it's still as powerful as it started, so that proves what i've been arguing you for-your work is powerful stuff, no matter how off-your-beaten-track you may go. sometimes it's better that way. keep going.

I like the way you had Ada fighting against not only the bad guys but herself too.

Ada is my fave character and you kept her true to herself.

Good writing!

Good to see an Ada story! Regarding the gun I do think it was Adas because she didnt want to hurt Leon. Then again I can be mistaken, I have to play the game again when I have the time. But to me it looked like she chose Leon instead of the mission. Keep writing!

Excellently written, I quite like it.

Oh, and a minor point, but it's generally agreed Leon was mistaken when he thought it was Ada's gun that was empty. On the balcony atop the chasm, Ada's gun had falled down with her into the depths of the hole. The gun remaining on the walkway was Annette's.

Just a minor point though, and it doesn't detract from the fact that this is a very good piece of writing. :)

Good story! I'm a big L/C fan too. But this was cool for an Ada fic. I don't care for steve, but he could have his own fic. . . if he can ern it. Write more storys, you write really well! Good luck!

diddly day

This is a wonderful fic! I am a big Ada fan, and this is very well-written and thoughtful. Great work! )