This is fantastic! I really enjoyed it!

I enjoyed this look at "what could have been"; it seems fairly grounded in reality. Their reflections are rather bittersweet, which is fitting, and with a proper amount of levity. Nice work. :)

Not only does it let u think bout their lives but it also let u think bout yours and the decisions u make... Man that was very powerful although I hate the idea of maiko and kataang happenin but this was totally different. And to be honest I thank u for that. This was a mind changin story. :)

Great one-shot, one of the best I've read.

Had alot of emotion, it's good not seeing mindless fluff now and then.

I think you should go bigger, I wanna read more!